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Hello! Thanks for the update! I'll admit I've been checking several times a week (that sounds so much better than saying every day) for an update ^^

More Tracey! I admit, I'm liking this dichotomy between Tracey and Trowa quite a bit. Tracey is a hard character to grasp, not the least of which because his character is fluid (due to being a construct of Trowa's mind and Trowa changes his character when it suits him), but also because ... I feel like he was a lot more pathetic and passive and confrontation-avoiding than he was shown here? Trowa, too, was a lot more ... GRRR than I imagined his character being ... but hey. As you said, he's basically caged with no physical or mental outlet (other than writing, which he hates, LOL).

Thanks for writing! I will now resume my happy stalking, lol.

(I'm sorry, Trowa, but I really hope Heero or someone finds you really really soon ^^;;; )

I loved this chapter. I almost felt like I was in Trowa withdrawal after the previous chapter (18), and now, with this chapter... *huggle*

I really liked the description about going into another's mind, slipping into a persona. The details were enough that it felt like I could understand the whole process.

Thanks for updating so soon =)

No one before Nizar. He'll kill Trowa for shooting him.
Can't wait for Fahd and Trowa to meet up again. Will they?

OMG Heero moaned Trowas name. Ooh I love it.

Where is Trowa?

I look forward to more.

Thank you for the new chapter, and so quick, too!

I really like the idea of poly-pairing (guilty fandom that very few people indulge in or carry out satisfyingly -- most give up halfway through), so I'm all for the direction your story is heading.

I find it interesting that the hermaphroditism that was a major issue earlier on has sort of faded out by this point. Not completely, and perhaps it will rear its head later, but for now, it's almost like the characters are saying "Trowa is more important than that" by not even bringing it up. Either that, or it's just a progression of plot and I'm overanalyzing ^^;

Heero's POV... I liked the latter half, although I'll admit I thought Heero was a bit out of character from Fahd's POV. I think it was because he talked quite a bit more than I expected him to, but it might also be the phrases he's choosing to use. Heero's POV was Heero to me, but the Heero that appeared in Fahd's POV was a bit different. (Sorry ^^; )

I wonder what Trowa is doing now...

Again, thanks for writing!

O_o ... I totally didn't see that coming. Heero has feelings for Trowa, *hugs* I love you so much!
It makes sense now why Heero wanted to know if Trowa was seeing someone, because if he's with someone then he can't have his fantasy of wanting him too.
Oh, please write more soon!

Also, i am a huge 1x3 fan, you should totally write a 1x3 fic when you get a chance or when you finish this story.

omg ... I literally squealed when I noticed this had updated. And then I spent the rest of the time reading the fic squealing, too. I really liked the dynamic between Fahd and Nizar. I'm not a big fan of either characters, but the rounding of them ... they're very 3 dimensional, I think. Admittedly, I didn't get the whole master pupil thing before this ... I'd always thought it was just servant master...? Mm. Maybe I missed something.

Anyways, I loved the shooting scene and how it was written. Trowa's planning that led up to that part. I loved the use of the clipped sentences to increase the tension. You have a very good grasp of flow and word choice, as well as wry humor, lol.

Thanks for writing! I hope life starts looking up for you, soon. (If this is a repeat review, sorry. I think I accidentally hit something wrong on AFF, but I really wanted to send you a review!)

Chapter seventeen.

You mean, mean woman.

OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm pretty sure I just died. You have made my day by updating this. Go Trowa!
He finally got to shoot Nizar. Fahd is going to turn himself in.
Wow! Talk about balls. Fahd just walked up in there and turned himself in. But he mentioned it was Trowa's doing. Is he trying to take Trowa down with him? Or is Fahd up to something? Now the other pilots know something is going on. Talk about a cruel, cruel cliffhanger. I can't wait until the next part.

Quatre was totally awesome in this chapter! Most people write Quatre as a weak little sissy but if you have actually read the manga or watched the anime you would know that for the calm mannar and soft voice, Quatre is actually a natural born leader. Hell he ran away from home at the age of 8, and took a bullet for Rishard. When the 5 boys met up and started working together in Gundam Wing it was Quatre not Heero who took on the role as leader. He was also the one to take responsibility of disposing of the Gundams, and then getting them back.

I'm so excited to see what will happen between Fahd and Trowa, I can't even speculate how this confrontation is going to go because I have so many ideas about how it could go running through my mind. Also, what will happen to Trowa, and who he will ultimately end up with. Can hardly wait for the next installment!!

Chapter sixteen was definitely worth waiting for. I follow this story pretty rabidly, and the update didn't disappoint or hold anything back. Quatre was the perfect combination of refinement and ruthlessness. Thanks so much for writing him that way.