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Thank you so much for updating. I was extremely happy to see that this had been updated. This is seriously my favorite story.
Everyday I check to see if it's been updated and am disappointed when it's not. I have to remind myself that unlike me, other people have lives. Then just when I get that through my thick skull, I check and see that you've updated. LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the length. I am definitely one of those readers who prefer long chapters.

Hehe Trowa stabbed Fahd. I love Nizar. Especially when he calls Trowa mutt and when he threatened to bash his head. I feel so bad for Trowa but at the same time I like to see him suffer. Despite knowing it was wrong, he got into the sex. Fahd is going to dig into Trowa's past. Can't wait to see what he does with that. If it makes Nizar come close to feeling bad for him, then it's got to be bad. Also can't wait to see what happens with the other pilots

Keep up the awesome work. I certainly am looking forward to seeing the next chapter when you're ready.

Yes!!! You are back with this story! Please continue it. Despite the fact that this is darker story than those I usually read, it has me hooked. And I can't wait to see what happens with the other pilots and trowa...

OMG! You have no idea the earsplitting squee my dorm mates were privy to when I came to check on another story's updates and saw yours. Lol, I literally yelled something to the effect of "Holy Shit is this what I think it is?!?!?!" *grin* So wonderful to have you back again. Though I will have to go back and reread the whole thing just to refresh my memory. And I totally get where you're coming from worrying about characterization after being away from a fandom for so long. I myself have fics from different fandoms that I'd love to finish, but have no idea if I could even do them justice anymore.

To the idea of looking down on fanfiction. HA! I understand being protective of your 'babies' (i.e. stories) but I just can't bring myself to see fanfiction as a bad thing. As an amateur I'd personally love to get original works published one day, but until then I'm getting more experience and better feedback practicing things like plot development and character consistency and dialogue without being encumbered by having to build the entire world, cast and backstory first. It's like a video game to me. Here's your characters, world, and the story so far. Now add continuing plot and have at! So much fun, and such good practice for a writer trying to hone and develop their abilities. And there's the added bonus that I get to enjoy favorite fandoms more interactively than a video game would let me because I can choose more storylines, create sequels of my own, and ultimately remain entertained by the fandom much longer than if I just stuck to canon. So yea, loves fanfiction for that.

Oh, and if you're looking for someone to discuss story ideas with, or even just characters, I'm open for being a beta reader if you're interested. I'm too lazy to sign in, but search my name and you should see my email address on my profile. Happy writing, and hope to see more chapters soon.

~Whip~

This was a good chapter as well. Only I can't imagine what the others will think or do or say when they find out.

thanks for updating!!!! I was dying to know what happened! I thought it would never be finished. Keep going please.

The sex scene was raw and emotional. I found it good to read. FYI you sound as stressed as I feel!

Wow, I decided to check this fic on the offchance (and to read it again) and I find it updated! =DDDDD

I really wish aff had story alerts...

Thanks for remembering us readers! The characterization was good, considering the long hiatus. I can't wait to read about the developments in the Gundam Team in terms of suspicions and... ... you know, this makes me sound like a horrible person XD

Thanks for the chapter =)

Yay, you updated! I love this story and every now and then I check back to see if there is more. So glad to see you are continuing it!

Darn you for posting such a long chapter when I have sewing to do!!!

But I can't blame you. There were so many intricately detailed, slow scenes where you feel yourself pulled into Trowa's thoughts and emotions, particularly the mirror scene in the shower. I also savored those moments where Heero watched him throughout breakfast and asked him later about the bacon, or when Wufei noticed what crummy shape he was in after his ride to work; it's funny that the quieter, less gregarious members of their circle of friends are the ones who seem to be able to read him the best.

This was fantastic. I noticed some of the warnings, but I'm sticking with this for a while, that much I already know.

Yay! You're continuing the story! Please keep it up! It's great!