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I liked the initial idea....and that's where it stopped. it seems to me that you're taking ever critique as a personal attack, but even so, i hope that someone would be able to get through to you: get this beta-ed~~ >_<;;; i'm sure there are lots of people out there who're willing to beta this -__-;;~
The main problems are simple lack of punctuation in many places, as well as lots of spelling mistakes. they just makes your fic so hard to read ;__;. i REALLY want to continue reading, but...it's really hard >_>;;. ....hope you see that we're really not flaming you, but are merely trying to make your fic more...readable (i think would be the right word here...).

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Hello Ace. My name is Yume and I must say that fic Gundam Slave Boy was a good idea and I am glad that you wrote it. But I must say that it was a litle too cruel. Heero was too cruel for Duo. The end was very good. Fix the things between Duo and Heero and Quatre and Trowa was great. And what happend with Wufei? Did he leave them?
Really, I like your fics and I hope you will write more of them. You are really good. I think you have a great talent. ^-^ Only others don´t must be so cruel. But it was great. Bye bye. Yume ^^

P.s. I am only "attacking" because I am being Attacked. Your the only person I have ever "Attacked" If that is how you want to put it. You want to go to war Well lets go Cause I got the God of Death Deathscythe on my side and Sandrock and Heavyarms and Nataku or Shelong and Wing Zero. and Zero 1 and the Talgees Eaveon (There love thar spelling mwahahahahahaha) You can say I am crazy But I already know what! This is to much fun I love this thanks for letting me have so much fun.

Quatre's Angel and Quatre is an angel ^_^ awww Quatre with wings how sweet!

Aw. That's all? I'm glad that everything worked out though. I'll be waiting for you new stories.

awwwwwwwww you finished it!!!! DAMN! I really loved reading your story!!!!!!!! I hope you write many more:P!

awwwwwwwww you finished it!!!! DAMN! I really loved reading your story!!!!!!!! I hope you write many more:P!

Well, that takes care of the whole Trowa and Duo thing with their Masters I guess. Mm. Good chapter. I wonder if Wufei is going to get a slave too. Update soon please!

Ow. That has got to hurt Trowa. Guess things are going to get even more interesting now that Quatre has Trowa's soul.

I'm really glad that you updated so soon. Now Wufei comes in. I can't wait to see how this will turn out.

Really, really, really good chapter. Poor Quatre. I like how you had Heero handle the situation with Quatre. Update soon please!