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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too bad you can't fave fics anymore...
Anyways, ooh, I like this so far! And yay for unicorn!Ed.
So, yeah, update soon, please, okay!
Anyways, ooh, I like this so far! And yay for unicorn!Ed.
So, yeah, update soon, please, okay!
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is awesome, and I can't wait until you update again. Though its short, I really enjoyed it. Nice twist on things, with the Guardian shtick. Awesome!
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe sorry, it's just that your story is so good that I get frustrated when I can't read more! And I get a little grumpy too. Sorry again!
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You believe it?? I actually had tears in my eyes reading that note that Ed left for Al...It's soo sad and yes, your story is extremely short and too hurrieded but i still liked it alot..
Keep it up!!
Keep it up!!
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it. can't wait for next chapter.
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
See? that's what I mean!! too short! I'm getting pissed. If you're going to post chapters that short you should post two each day. I liked it though
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
theres more isnt there? Keep writing please! This is so good and so sad and aaah!!!!! Keep writing. You did say it was a roy/ed. They arent together yet! So please write more! You are...arent you?
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok I don't mean to be harsh or anything but... your chapters can barely pass as one, I think that if I put the six of them together, well that will make a real chapter, at least at extension. I like the story, I do, but as a writter, reader and Beta I really recomend you to make your chapters longer, because (I don't know if I speak for the rest of the readers, but I do speak for myself) the short chapters make the readers frustrated. I hope to hear more of this story soon, longer chapters if possible.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, I really do. I'll give you that,but the chapters are too damn short please make them longer!
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've made a good start to this, and I'll be watching to see how it develops.