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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was great. They really had Ed going in that one.
You write a disstressed Ed very well ...KUDOS!!
You write a disstressed Ed very well ...KUDOS!!
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My, my... that was gorgeous. I cried.
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And, I almost hate to say it, but many, many thanks for making use of that newfangled spell check thing.
There's nothing that annoys me more than poorly-written smut.
*chu*
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And, I almost hate to say it, but many, many thanks for making use of that newfangled spell check thing.
There's nothing that annoys me more than poorly-written smut.
*chu*
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woot! That was Hawt! Especially Roy tied to the chair and helpless. mmm...helpless Roy.... *drools*
There were some parts where i didn't quite get who was who, and who was being refered to by another character. Rereading a line or too usually cleared it up, but i would suggest less pronouns at times. Maybe try to make sure a sentance with more than 2 'he/him/his' pronouns has a least one character name noun or something... I'm not a writer by any means, so my suggestion might just be crap.
But yay...smut... dog pile smut even... yay....
There were some parts where i didn't quite get who was who, and who was being refered to by another character. Rereading a line or too usually cleared it up, but i would suggest less pronouns at times. Maybe try to make sure a sentance with more than 2 'he/him/his' pronouns has a least one character name noun or something... I'm not a writer by any means, so my suggestion might just be crap.
But yay...smut... dog pile smut even... yay....
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH that was hott
not that i'd expect anything else
*total*
*fic*
*love*
not that i'd expect anything else
*total*
*fic*
*love*
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, niice, especially on the testing out the positions :P
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*nosebleed*
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I admit it. I've been stalking you. I've just been too damn lazy to review. Or perhaps it was more that I was too eager to get to the next fic to review the one I had finished reading. Anyways.
While I'll willingly admit I dislike Havoc being there, it was still damn hot. Ed teasing them for days, everyone calling in sick...all of it was just funny. And hot. I can even accept Havoc being there because it was so hot. ::snicker:: Anyways. Keep up the good work. I'm in love with all of your stories. ^____^
While I'll willingly admit I dislike Havoc being there, it was still damn hot. Ed teasing them for days, everyone calling in sick...all of it was just funny. And hot. I can even accept Havoc being there because it was so hot. ::snicker:: Anyways. Keep up the good work. I'm in love with all of your stories. ^____^
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH!! I love this!! Most funny thing is that i read this in school with the teacher looking right at me! lol... Beyond awesome, excelent job in keeping the characters in their usual play. XD
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...*crazy fangirl squeeeeee!*....
*throws self at ur feet* im not worthy! im not worthy!
...*is speechless*....
you are my hero. that trio is just... *guh*...
and you made a new chapter! omg.
please oh please entertain the possibility of another chapter..or another something anything with those three...
*passes out from nosebleed bloodloss*
*throws self at ur feet* im not worthy! im not worthy!
...*is speechless*....
you are my hero. that trio is just... *guh*...
and you made a new chapter! omg.
please oh please entertain the possibility of another chapter..or another something anything with those three...
*passes out from nosebleed bloodloss*