rate_review Reviews

Dear god are you trying to kill us?!?!?!!? I think my blood pressure rose from reading that! That was so frigging HOT! And unbelivable passonate! It was tangible! Damn I can't wait for the next chapter! In my opinion there is not nearly enough of Roy "getting it" rather than giving it!

OMG THAT WAS SO FREAKING HOT!!!! w00t!! :D I wasn't sure there for a minute if Ed would find the confidence to ride the wild Mustang (*snerk* XD I couldn't resist!) but it looks like he's definitly 'up' to the challenge! ;) (I couldn't resist again! LOL) I can't wait!!!! :D
Please please please please please update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

Superbly written! I enjoyed what you've done very much. Your grammar is wonderful and your story flows quiet captively. I look forward to seeing more, if you write it.

You're quite the talented author yourself. For a simple birthday present, this was well written and a kind read. Thanks for offering us a little PW(A)P-I think you were dancing around the fine line between lust, and love the entire time and the tug of war made it not only realistic, but captivating. This was ten minutes well spend, I left with a smile on my face.

?? lemon? where? What happened to it? Did I miss it? This was more like "teaser, the extended version" if you ask me. Also, the ending kinda confused me. Roy's busy thinking about what Ed's going to do to him and trying to find the courage to say 'I love you' then there's the line, "The tiny smile, self-satisfied and almost embarrassed at it, when Roy had come at his hands" (implying they'd already done it), then it goes right back to sweaty palmed anticipation of doing it. Unless Roy was thinking of a previous time when he'd cum at Ed's hands, I'm lost. That must be one hell of a long staircase if Roy's got the time to think of all this! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

Can't wait...

I can't wait t read more! Glad you are updating :).

Af had to dunk herself in a cold shower I poured cold water on my head (i'm at work) goddess that was hot... we can't wait for more

PLEASE MORE SOON

Rysha and Affie
rabid yaoi fangirls

MOTHER HUMPING TEASE! If you don't update soon all the blood is going to stay pooled in my nether regions and explod! Do you want me to bleed to death from my groin, huh do you?

In all seriousness, it was a good teaser and it gets me really excited to see the finsihed product! If it's anything like the first chapter it will be fanatstic!

*big grin* Nice little teaser ya got here!! Really whets the appetite for the rest of it - for which I can't wait!! I just hope I don't have to wait for too long before we get to the much anticipated lemon!! :) It's very sweet and endearing that both Roy and Ed are nervous about it too. "Roy Mustang, this is what you do to me..." *smiles* I love that line!
Update soon please!
Koneko =^.^=