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for Birthday Suit

by ibshafer

person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!! The way you wrote Ed's realization of what his gift truly meant was perfect!! Please do anything you can to get your friend to write the next scene for this!! Hell, you can write it for all I care! :) It will be awesome to see the mighty Mustang surrendering control to Ed!! Can't wait to see that!! :D
Please update!
Koneko =^.^=
person Jaugi
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! that was so clever and cute! i want to read a lemon when roy is the bottom! is there going to be one written?
person TrulyWished
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's great, I love it. Such a fantastic present, can't wait for the next scene!
person Exotic Rose83
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved It!! You really should right another EdxRoy fic and make it a story! I was kinda sad it was a oneshot! Tight work.
person haunted angel (too damn lazy to sign in)
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was most definitely an awesome birthday present, darling! I'll definitely have to write that lemon... *drool*
person milky
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*_* LOVE. This is the best Roy/Ed I've seen in forever, seriously. Ed's reaction to the food was hilarious - and his reaction to Roy - and the attention to details...all of it was excellent. I like the notion that Ed can't instantly fix every stain, and that he was turned on Roy's alchemy around him, and all of that.
person GlitterGirl
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, oh, how could you be so cruel as to end it *there*?! Needless to say, I enjoyed the ficcie quite a lot...especially the bit with the baking soda.

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