rate_review Reviews

although it was difficult to imagine Goku like that, this story was still great. It had an awesome plot and was well written. :)

NOT BAD STORY BUT QUITE NOT MUCH YAOI FOR 90 PERCENT OF THE WORD DESCRIBED A MURDER

I absolutely adore this story. I've read it so many times and yet the end still... saddens me. I wanted to know if they ever got together. A sequel would be great but at the same time I can't really see how it would happen. Well... unless there was a twist or plothole you could use ^^;

I think this is the only actual dbz horror story that was started and completed on any fiction site o.O

Wow is right - thank you so much for taking the time to comment inuyasha even though it's been years since this fic was finished.

Actually with the wish Kakarott made no one would have known of the incidents that happened - except perhaps Shenlong - and he usually doesn't converse with mortals.

WOW! This was really intense! I hated Goku being eveil-but you kept the story so intriging (sp) that I had to keep reading to find out what would happen! Very well written! One question-does anyone ever tell Goku what happened? I would hope not-he'd never be able to live with it! (that's assuming that Mr. PoPo and Dende remember?)

Oh no, its over. That was a great ending. You should try making an Epilogue or something, or maybe I'm just being greedy but I loved this story. I hope you guys write another one as good because of course I will read. Great job, I'll be looking out for another one. ^_^

Awww...such a good ending. I did not see that happening. I can't believe that Vegeta had actually died!! But, I'm glad that Kakarotto finally realized his mistake. Even through all the evil inside him he found a way past his saiyajin nature. Greatness! I liked the fact that Mirai Trunks teamed up with the androids. That's a pretty interesting team. And I'm glad that things went back to normal. Though, you do kinda feel bad for Goku that he never got Vegeta in the end, but he's wise enough to know that Vegeta can't "belong" to anyone. So...great story. Loved the absurd violence and gore (every fanfiction needs that :) and the deeper aspects of Goku's character. It seemed like a fun story to write, and I can't wait for the next one. Great stuff!

This is such a dark ficcy....but so much fun to read! I cant wait for the last chapter!

Wow, who knew seventeen was still around, Nice twist. Update.

Yeah Gohan kick his butt. I like that Gohan has more hidden power in Dragonball GT they didn't show his power.