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Oh...my...god....AMAZING CHAPTER!! Wow, really awesome. I loved how you wrote 17 and 18. Their attitudes were just so amazingly perfect and calm. So cool. I think I pretty much fell in love with both of them after reading this. And I loved the line at the end, no was ever happy to see them! Haha, really great stuff. Anyway...that fight scene between Goku and Vegeta was really well done. I was sitting in suspense the whole time. I loved Vegeta's desperation to fight against Kakarot, he truly is a confident and strong warrior. I really can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Will 17 ans 18 save the day? Will Gohan be able to fight his father in such a pained condition? And...will Goku ever really get his hands on Vegeta? Oooo....angst. Again, really awesome chapter.

Wow, beautifully written chapter. I'm glad to see that Vegeta is remaining calm...for now. I'm interested in seeing how this fight will go between Vegeta and Kakarot. And afterwards, will Vegeta be able to fend him off? And hopefully the dragonballs will be collected in time! Arg! So much to do in such little time. It's getting quite suspenseful and I can't wait to see what happens next! So, again, great chapter!

Very good chapter...can't wait to find out what happens next. Poor Gohan...but especially my poor Vegeta. Update soon.

And P.S. did I mention that I never really like Mr. Popo, that stupid idiot.

Ah, no, you can't stop it there!! So much action, so much suspense! I loved it SO much. I can't wait to see how things will turn out for all the characters. Goku's crazy, Vegeta could possibly became a sex-slave, and Gohan could be killed! Great stuff. I do wonder how Kakarotto will act now that he knows both Gohan AND Vegeta are against him. Please update soon. Wonderific!

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M HOOKED!

This is getting SO exciting! Ah! I can't believe that Vegeta fell for such a trick...I can't believe Kakarot would do such a tricky thing! I really love this and now I have to wonder how evil Kakarot will react towards Vegeta now that he knows the prince would rather have the real Goku back. Gohan is in trouble and hopefully he and Vegeta can get Goku back! I'm expecting to see some angsty, terrifying, action-packed...stuff coming up...and I'm excited. Great stuff!

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I just shivered when you guys cut Krillin mouth in half.EWWW but it was visicous at the same time! Update!

I won't lie, I laughed my ass off at this. Very great and detailed, Krillins death had me cracking up! Sorry, but it did. Kakarot is so evil, its so good. Continue, by all means. The gore always amuses me and you guys always add the right amount of it. Thanks for updating! >:}

Very good, wow....I can't even explain but I loved the part when goku said, "Wear your blood, your death, with honor." That was just gorgeous, update.