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Nice chapter Update soon

Oh, poor Vegeta! I'm seeing some angsty situations in the future. I can't wait! Really good chapter. I like the little details about Vegeta having really bad luck, as usual. I love how perceptive he is. He knows how this whole situation could get worse and how he needs to act to let Kakarotto think he's enjoying it. I only hope that Gohan moves quickly enough to save the prince. I felt so bad for both Vegeta and Gohan when Mr. and Mrs. Briefs were thrown out the house. How awful for them to see that...and how terrifying, too. Kakarotto is nothing but a crazed killer! I like the downtrodden, hopepless feelings they have...but I also like how this chapter threw small tidbits of humor, such as Vegeta's thoughts to this whole problem and how he would "perform". Quite great. I look forward to the next chapter.

Excellent job! It seems the story has taken in unexpected turn. I cannnot wait for the next update!

Vegeta is smart.

Oooo...terror-filling. Goku has definitely gone off the deep end. I'm excited to see how Vegeta will react when Kakarot decides to MAKE him his mate. And I worry for Gohan, too. I hope he's smart enough and brave enough to save himself, Vegeta, and return Goku back to normal. Great chapter...I shall be looking forward to the next one!

:D :) :O God, I love this story. I mean the gore and all out murders are so jaw-dropping, I find myself grinning at the awesomeness of it all. I just love this. Just reading about Goku doing all these things is so...ahhh! But, yes, it is Kakarotto and his saiyajin side has gone crazy. Great details in all chapters, and again, I love the different styles that each author brings to such an intense, bizarre, and graphic story. I can tell that you're having a great time writing it because the words and scenes just flow so smoothly. I am quite excited to see what Vegeta thinks of all this and to see if Goku will end up getting what wants..even if he must do it by force! o.O I'm looking forward to the next chapter(s). Great stuff!

Poor Gohan he lost everyone close to him. I hope he kills Goku, plus it's great that he is a ss3 now. I like the story but I don't like the fact he killed family members.... Well maybe Pan and ChiCHi but poor Goten. Gohan should win for once.

Wow, so Vegeta's going to find out everything huh? Update fast.

SO awesome that Vegeta woke up!!! I am avidly waiting for the nextupdate soon!

I've been away for some time and when I came back I see all this lovin!!!! What a wonderful way to return. This story was soo much fun to write and I wish we could do more.