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person Noel
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Saiyajinprincess
hi there,
itīs not goku for me.
no. not a bit. because nothing is left from him.
actually you took everything he really is.
and actually i donīt get, why you didīnt create your own character for your story?
because now itīs not even a guy whoīs familiar to kakarott.
itīs a ...err... "freddie-killya-jason-junior-whatever-person" who needs a carbage. and urgent.
i really donīt have a clue, why you used goku for that. if you know,tell me!wanna know! ^-^
^.~ i think you should use ur fantasy, to do your own thing, to write originals? (well,just a suggestion.)
whatever. your story, not mine. :)
and thatīs that.
bye. ^^

Saiyajinprincess

We did it this way because not many people do. It is a side that has never shown on Goku. We have seen Nappa, Raditz, and Vegeta act this way but never Goku. We took it to what it would be like if he never lost his Saiyan rage. Besides more will be revealed. But we did what no one else does, we just took the outragous idea we came up with and the story stemmed.


person Death Note
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how Vegeta will react when he finds out what happened to Trunks
person dfs
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person Foxxy Jones
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More. That was great! I this fic isnot nearing completion any time soon. Do you guys know who will write the last chapter?
person Yuurei
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little surprised that Goten went before Gohan. Oh well. Wrong place; wrong time. And Goku finally gets to see his prince again. Yay misunderstandings. Great chapter. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.
person Niiro_Yuuyake
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I was hoping Gohan would die. That kid just annoys me! But alas, my Goten died! I hope he gets revved or something! And even now that's he's dead(most horribly, but not as bad, thank goodness) I still can't stop reading!

WHAT ARE YOU GUYS DOING TO ME?! Im in love with your fic!! Update soon please! I need to read more!! Especially now that Vegeta thinks he's a killer!
person Michelle
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Yes, Yes, progress. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person Death Note
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw man this is getting soooo good.
person Anon
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*jaw on floor.* I just read the 2nd chapter....WOW! This story is greatly written, such good details, such great descriptions! Ah, gore, oh pain, ohhh obsession!! I love it and I am so excited to read some more!
person vegetachik7
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the idea behind this story...and the fact that some of the top dbz fanfiction writers are writing it together is just so perfect. Again, love the violence and gore...and the fact that Goku is doing it! I'm anxious to see how Vegeta is going to view all this in later chapters and how, exactly, Goku is going to become as this goes on. Really great stuff.

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