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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Unoriginal idea, this story has the same argument than the fic 'Morbid innocence' by an author called Celipa, posted at the mail list of Saiyajin secrets three years ago(Oct, 13, 2003): Goku, turned into a pshycho, obsessed with Vegeta, starts killing people, first Chichi, though there he doesn't kill Pan, and Gohan goes to see his father and asked him what he had done after killing Chichi. In this story will Goku try to kill Gohan too like in the original fic?
I wonder if at least you have asked permission to the author to use her/his idea.
I wonder if at least you have asked permission to the author to use her/his idea.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By the way, I don't want to be unfair, so if I'm wrong assuming that you
knew the fic 'morbid innocence', then I apologize for my previous comment.
knew the fic 'morbid innocence', then I apologize for my previous comment.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is very disturbing. I'm totally intrigued by the way Goku's acting, is it due to his obsession with Vegeta or is it anything else? I can't wait for the explanation of such behavior, surely it would be astonishing.
I have one doubt, is Goku conscious of the terrible things he's doing and of this changes of demeanor or not? And it will be interesting what the reaction of Vegeta will be when he founds out what's happening with Goku.
I have one doubt, is Goku conscious of the terrible things he's doing and of this changes of demeanor or not? And it will be interesting what the reaction of Vegeta will be when he founds out what's happening with Goku.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god.... that was absofuckinglutely gory!!! I loved the way you described the deatils, That was great. I love it when Goku loses control. Please commence more killing. And for gods sake UPDATE SOON!!!!
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Anon:
We accept your apology. We've never heard of this fic you speak of. We wrote this 2 years ago (almost 3 years now) and i assure you, it's nothing like that fic. We're only on the third chapter, it's a coincidence obviously. If you want to point the writer this way so they can take a look, that's fine. The idea has been done (not in this way)- if all the fics that are similar to another fic were taken down, there wouldn't be much to read. thanks for pointing it out thou.
We accept your apology. We've never heard of this fic you speak of. We wrote this 2 years ago (almost 3 years now) and i assure you, it's nothing like that fic. We're only on the third chapter, it's a coincidence obviously. If you want to point the writer this way so they can take a look, that's fine. The idea has been done (not in this way)- if all the fics that are similar to another fic were taken down, there wouldn't be much to read. thanks for pointing it out thou.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
After your explanation I must apologize again, it seems that I was wrong. It's just that the idea of this fic it's something you usually don't see at least in this fandom, so I drew a wrong conclusion.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. Yet another well written chapter. It was wonderful. And yes! My 2 most hated characters dies(Pan and Chi-Chi). You guys are pleasing me big time. I wonder what will happen next? Goku seems like he's going Bi-polar, one minute, killing(ruthlessly) his granddaughter, and the next nervously greeting his son.
Loved it!
-Niiro
***Update soon please***
Loved it!
-Niiro
***Update soon please***
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol, Goku is weird. I like this Update
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG sooo good. Especially the gorey parts with Chi Chi. U have to continue soooooooooo fast FOR ME!!!
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...That was dark. And very graphic....I likey! You can't keep us waiting long! You must update soon! PLEASE!!!