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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... 0.0 wow *laughs like crazy* she fucking diserves it for calling vegeta a slut
go goku! i can't wait to see his next move :)
love the story!
iris
go goku! i can't wait to see his next move :)
love the story!
iris
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
..... are you supposed to be continueing on the story like that?
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi Michelle,
'Tis okay: http://anime2.adultfanfiction.net/authors.php?no=1296799523
'Tis okay: http://anime2.adultfanfiction.net/authors.php?no=1296799523
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is absurd, this sadidistic and cruel Goku is unbelievable, so OOC that it makes no sense. I can't see him doing such things against someone defenseless and innocent.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW...that is all i have to say. this is insane, or rather goku is. man i never thought this story would take this direction when i started it! great job, keep it up.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter was very promising, but I'm very dissapointed with the second chapter, you have made a wrong choice of character, Goku is not fit for that role you made him play.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Blind much? Did you even read what it said in the summary? We didn't write that for our health, we write it so you won't read something you don't want to.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Stands and applauds* Lovin' this so far, especially chapter 2. That was some delicious gore.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
~Yuurei~
Looking forward to the next chapter.
~Yuurei~
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it...Update please
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going. I can't wait to see what happens next!!