rate_review Reviews

Well done, very well done. I wasn't expecting such a good story. It was very well written and thought out. I hope that this will not be your last fanfiction and that you will write a sequel.

Holy knickers. No joke, I scoured the internet for this fanfiction not even a month ago, and tried e-mailing you to find it, dug through my old emails to see if I could find a link to it, did pretty much everything short of strait up tracking you down to find this fanfiction. HURRAH! You posted it here!

You probably don't remember me, but I was that odd little 13 year old girl who left you ridiculously long, praising reviews for this story (which were certainly deserved) about four years ago. I wrote that T/P, Torn, way back in the day, and you and I sent a few emails back and fourth. But anyway, enough of that, over the summer I became interested in T/P again, and I'm completely depressed about how the interest in that coupling and DBZ in general has waned significantly. The Trunks and Pan archives are gone, as are many other sites/fics I used to frequent.

But I just wanted to let you know that you totally made my day by posting this fic again. It's far too wonderful to let it disappear completely.

:)

I truely hope you continue this story. i really was hoping that he would have mated with Marron. this was a great bdz story.