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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most funny and enjoyable things I read in quite a while. Both guys are rather IC, even though that doesn't matter so much to me. Grammar and spelling are okay, so the story is also easy on the eyes. And of course it serves my needs to read more about my OTP.
Great job, well done
Great job, well done
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August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sexyyyyyy i love it ((:
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great oneshot.
I laughed at the people chasing Goku, his winking at the lifeguard, and the crab getting his tail. Then drooled at the lemon :)
I laughed at the people chasing Goku, his winking at the lifeguard, and the crab getting his tail. Then drooled at the lemon :)
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Zofo - I don't think people give you enough credit for all the lovely reviews you leave in your reading wake. *SQUISHES* Thank you. Not only for the reviews you leave for my stories, but for the reviews you leave for everyone. :)
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! That was the perfect end-of-summer one-shot: humor, fun on the beach, a yummy high-quality lemon at the end, and even some real Dragonball Z style saving the day heroics! I loved the "stopping the tidal wave" action scene-- I felt like it could have come right out of the show. And Goku with the crab on his tail killed me. If I were a better artist I'd draw you a great cartoony pic of that scene, but I'll have to settle for the hilarious mental image instead.
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Death by nosebleed... XD Yummy, dear, as always! ^^ Can't wait for more from you!
*dashes back to read again and drool herself a lake*
LOVE!
V.M.
*dashes back to read again and drool herself a lake*
LOVE!
V.M.