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for It's All Wrong

by KumikoChan

schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I liked the story. The sad ending was very "Don't Fear the Reaper". Sad and sweet. I think that the ending (the add-on) was good and didn't ruin the sad ending. Cool, very good writing.
person senko09
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* *sniff* i like it *sniff* *cries*the ending was sad........wait i even cried at the beginning *sniff* (yells at family) Stop stareing havent you ever seen a girl get emotional over a story!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good job
person cm34
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a lot of o.o.c
person cm34
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh to the morbid side of life where love wouldnt exist just strife
person ladyfang_05
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (tear) beautiful
person RottenPalmTree&TheJumboShrimp
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story so much, but . . . The ending made me mad . . . Just a little. *fingers -->| |<-- for emphasis* Roy AND Eddo died . . . You made me cry! Anyway, I loved this story very much! Angsty . . . I think I'm starting to like angst, THANKS FOR THE WONDERFUL STORY!! . . . (That was my friend TheJumboShrimp . . .) Bye!
person naomi
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Thank you for reviewing my fic. I've only read the first chapter of this one but...wow. I love the emotion and angst:) Feels real and believable.
person dana
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked you story and that is saying something because death fics are so sad. and you made this one really good icing them like that. i cried too it was sweet that they will be togehter and twisted because of what they had to do to be together. really nice keep on writing although i hope your next fic will be much happier.
person Keely
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was terribly sad T_T I think I'll go vry my eye's out now... But it was still good, lol.
Drats, now I'm depressed... chocolate! XDD Anyways, great work!
person Hello2You
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great job! plz ubdate, this is beyond awesome!

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