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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So wow, if Roy's new squeeze just poisoned Ed, holy crap, that is amazing *_* Please let us know what happens.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You cant stop there!How cud u!I want more.Is aria evil?Will ed survive?Do roy n ed get together?Plz,hurry up n write the next chapter!
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I think I hate Aria just for being there. I mean, really, its EdxRoy. No girls needed. The built in angst from the competition is really good. Makes me feel sorry for all involved though.
I just have one thing that bugs me. The age gap between the brothers I thought was four years. And the timeline is post series but ignoring the movie, I assume.
Either way, this is an enjoyable read. I look forward to the next chapter.
I just have one thing that bugs me. The age gap between the brothers I thought was four years. And the timeline is post series but ignoring the movie, I assume.
Either way, this is an enjoyable read. I look forward to the next chapter.
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't want anyone to die by the end T_T
I'm looking foreward to an update, I can see how that didn't turn out to be a oneshot! Yay for more! XDDD
Great start. I don't have any suggestions, they'd probably be bad if I did... I'm sure whatever you come up with will be good ^^
I'm looking foreward to an update, I can see how that didn't turn out to be a oneshot! Yay for more! XDDD
Great start. I don't have any suggestions, they'd probably be bad if I did... I'm sure whatever you come up with will be good ^^