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Actually, Alfons looks more like Winry than Al.

Really.

From now on, he is Winry to me.

So there.

:P

I've just spent a pleasent ten minutes exploring your backlog of already submitted stories. Now I'm glad I was piqued enough to search this one out by the summary of "Good Girls Don't". As far as I know, you are the only writer to come up with the concept of Heidreich actually being female. Not only female, but the alter!Winry to boot. I'm awed by the smooth way you wrote the sex scene, it slides, it glides. And I'm not half as good as you, or Serenanna (another writer I admire). I half feel ashamed of my flailing attempts at lemon, and half feel challenged to do better.

Lol... that was funny, and very interesting. ::grins::^^ :) (:

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I KNEW IT. XD