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Oh, I love the unrelenting Goku! YAY! And Vegeta trying to figure out where to go from here...and figuring out what Goku had wanted in the first place, those were great!

This story keeps getting better!

....,,kakarott looked bored and asked the prince, who are you?"... xD that was great! :)
great job again! ^____^
it´s interesting to read the conversations between Tarneus and Goku.
It seems to me that Goku is the one who still desperately loves vegeta and Tarneus is the opposite. He doesn´t care, he´s more saiyan and nothing like "love" can ever hurt him. but you already make Tarneus remember a bit, don´t you? :)) Uhhhm, i really hope that he WILL remeber and also wants to... but wait! if goku tries to explain things to Tarneus, doesn´t mean it, that Tarneus want the explanations, either? Because they´re on soul split in two persons? The one who loves and the one who wants to get over it, for good?
Hm. Oo...err- ya. ^.-
i don´t know. I´m just very curious, what will happen in next chapter. so please keep on, i really like your story.
bye. ^^

Chapter 7

Fantastic! The chemistry between Tarneus and Vegeta went as expected, but kept a fresh outlook on the possibilities.

I look forward the the eighth chapter!

Awesome, oh man I almost cried, it was beautiful. I love you and I love the story, keep going!!

You are doing great keep it up

Well, if you must change the title, then I'd go with the 'To the Ends of the Universe'. *shrugs*


OH, this is getting so interesting. Vegeta has finally learned to IT. Goku is promising to haunt the other self...naked...hehehe, I get a kick out of that.

And now, Vegeta has found him! Yeah! Can't wait for the next update!

Chapter 6.

Great chapter. I am glad that Vegeta completed the training and found what he was looking for.

I wonder how far down memory lane Vegeta will travel, in his interactions with the new Goku. Will it be a horrific reminder of his past?

The next chapter looks most interesting. I look forward to seeing how these characters behave around each other now.

Keep up the great work!

Ah- he found him- sweet!!! That makes me happy. I LOVED the "in love with him or something" awesome, i can tell you're realling getting into everything. And as far as the new name goes, well i like heat of fire, but i think that the one that said the end of the universe or something was better than the to love a saiyan (or something), but either way, the story's the shit, the name shouldn't matter :) Awesome!!! Keep going!!!

hi ^^it is your first ff? you´ve done a really good job! :) god, i badly hope, vegeta will find goku, as quick as he can. but with IT it´s easy, isn´t it ?! errr...hm. but how will goku react?! will he remember him, trying to even kill him??? ummmmh... ~.~ well, hopefully the prince got soon, that he not only miss his sparring partner but his soulmate, lover, his ....D*E*S*T*E*N*Y ! =:*____*:=
i like your story! keep it on. :))bye.

Awesome story so far. I can hardly wait until Vegeta finally catches up to the new hardcore Goku. Poor little girl..but I must admit you completely surprised and shocked me with that one. I was all, "aww..cute little girl don't worry Goku's gonna help you," followed up with, "OMFG!!!" I feel I should have seen it coming, but I didn't realize the extent of Goku's newfound evil until that point. Wow... Well anyway, love the story so far and please update again soon.