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August 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
....since you asked, the last chapter felt quite anticlimactic to me. The story was also difficult to enjoy at times due to the large number of grammatical errors and constantly having to see stuff like this every paragraph:style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Tahoma'>Roy style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Tahoma'>
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December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...hhhhmmmmmm I Love this storie. I really do. I spent the last three days reading it between work hours. The ending kinda caught me by surprise though. It just kinda jumped out of no where. But i still love it. Thank you for this creation.
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. I felt the ending needs a little work though. I'd like to see what happens after this. How Ed and Roy first get together. It's kind of glossed over here.
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
25:
*pauses in an attempt to gather thoughts, then says the hell with it, and gets on with the review*
i really loved this story. the whole ride was amazing. it's been so long since i read any of this. i missed when the last chapter went up!! O.O thus, my just now reading it because i saw it and it said 'complete' and didn't think i'd finished it. and i hadn't. i think i ended up reading 24, like, three times. when it went up, at least once between then and now, and then before i read 25 tonight. anyway, this was a great story. i don't remember all the details of the story, because i've been reading it since last winter, but i remember enough of it to know how genuinely great it was. maybe some grammar errors, but there is no reason for me to nit-pick. the plot and the emotions were so intense. i was truely drawn in. i loved roy and his characterization. i particularly liked his differences from mustang, and the way the two plotlines were brought together in the begining. everything was just spectacular.
i am so happy we finally had a lemon! and the fact that it was the only one in the story made it that much more appreciated and special. when the section with the lemon in it started, the line was something about the mountain air, i was thinking, "it's gonna be all 'brokeback mountain', ain't it??" and it kinda was. yays.
thank you so much for posting this story, it was very good and made me very happy. i suppose i could stop rambling now, since i seem to have run out of things to say and need to go to bed. again, great fic.~
*pauses in an attempt to gather thoughts, then says the hell with it, and gets on with the review*
i really loved this story. the whole ride was amazing. it's been so long since i read any of this. i missed when the last chapter went up!! O.O thus, my just now reading it because i saw it and it said 'complete' and didn't think i'd finished it. and i hadn't. i think i ended up reading 24, like, three times. when it went up, at least once between then and now, and then before i read 25 tonight. anyway, this was a great story. i don't remember all the details of the story, because i've been reading it since last winter, but i remember enough of it to know how genuinely great it was. maybe some grammar errors, but there is no reason for me to nit-pick. the plot and the emotions were so intense. i was truely drawn in. i loved roy and his characterization. i particularly liked his differences from mustang, and the way the two plotlines were brought together in the begining. everything was just spectacular.
i am so happy we finally had a lemon! and the fact that it was the only one in the story made it that much more appreciated and special. when the section with the lemon in it started, the line was something about the mountain air, i was thinking, "it's gonna be all 'brokeback mountain', ain't it??" and it kinda was. yays.
thank you so much for posting this story, it was very good and made me very happy. i suppose i could stop rambling now, since i seem to have run out of things to say and need to go to bed. again, great fic.~
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe it's over, I'm still mad at you for killing Izzy but this ending makes up for it.
I love this story and you finished it beautifully.
I love this story and you finished it beautifully.
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Both of us enjoyed it a lot and are sad it's over you've done a wonderful job. We hope you continue to write more and more.
Affie and Rysha
Affie and Rysha
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was just perfect. It fit so well with the rest of the story. They still had to struggle in the way but were finding thier own happiness.
I am thrilled and sad that this story is over. It had been amazing to follow! But you did us all a fovor by ending it here, wide open, giving our imaginations plenty of room to dream!
Thank you for sharing this with us.
I am thrilled and sad that this story is over. It had been amazing to follow! But you did us all a fovor by ending it here, wide open, giving our imaginations plenty of room to dream!
Thank you for sharing this with us.
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story can't wait for more.
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have so far read up to...well..Chapter 13....and I am really enjoying this story. ( I read A LOT!!) My many thanks for writing such a captivating piece so far.
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn the universe. arg. i want more!! this story is really good, and i'm always looking forward to more! please update soon!! i love ed and roy, and i KNEW ed would compare al and roy for not giving answers. they're both jerks. jerks. anyway, great chapter, and i can't wait for more!~