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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. I just recently found this fic, and have been killing myself with lack of sleep since the first chapter- I never though I'd be able to get into a non-canon Roy, but here I am, begging for more. Your writing style is so... bold; I'm not sure how else to term it, but it's wonderful. And the story is so original- I loved every moment of it thus far and eagerly await further installments.
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like that chapter. I'm not sure if i've read this before. I've read so many fics lately but i like this story. This interaction between Ed and Roy is pretty good too. And they haven't even done anything yet! Good job.
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is it time for alter!royboy to save ed yet? poor ed... anyways, its always great to see updates no this, im following with bated breath
*total fic love*
*total fic love*
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just found this and have really enjoyed reading through from start to Chapter 10. It's a really good plot, and I hope you will continue to update, so I can see Ed and Captain Roy get together. Roy is very like the Colonel, but not exactly, and it makes him very interesting. Isabelle is a nice addition to the plot, too. You've also done a good job with the settings, because they each feel different. Oh, and I like the way you write Al - he's older, but still himself.
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AH! OH NOES! poor ed, right about now is where roy should come on some sort of large flying object to rescue ed so they can have grateful makeup sex :D
please?
im rivited to every update! more soon maybe?
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please?
im rivited to every update! more soon maybe?
???~
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay another good chapter ^^
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very good :) hoping that you'll continue it.
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this last chapter. The last scene was written very well, you could really feel Ed's discomfort and embarrassment. This story is moving along great and I can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully with some more Roy/Ed encounters!
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The drama the tension! You really know how to keep your aduience interested. Thank you for updating, adn your talents as a writer could definetly get you to the professional level.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ms. Kikiko! I can't read the rest of chapter eight! It stopped right at where the sicko showed up! Please, could you please send me the chapter? I would love you to death!!! This story is fantastic!