rate_review Reviews

Um... yeah forget what I said earlier. I refreshed the page so many times that it wouldn't come up however after I posted the review and tried it again it decided it would show up... Now back to the story, you just CANNOT leave it like that! Please, pretty please update soon! I love how you kept both of them in such sync with each other. It was fantastic and very fun to read. Although it was a bit messed up that Roy knocked him out like that. I can't believe he thinks Ed's crazy. Looking forward to your next chapter, I hope it comes fast! See ya.

*GAH* i leave for a monthish and when i get back there is mountains of beautiful fic. OMG that was nice, usually other-side-of-the-gate fics dont do it for me, but this one was pretty damn sweet. Updates would be wonderful, because now im /completly/ hooked!

i love how in character they are too, roy and ed can get so absorbed in arguing that the Signore has to go *yoo hoo, still got a guy with a gun on you guys, how about a little more attention on that* and if you're still doing that email for updates thing i'd love it, because i will send love and review every chapter if i get my hands on it :D

Chapter 7 is my favorite chapter yet. The pace of the story was a bit faster than in the previous chapters which I really liked and we finally got to see some Roy and Ed interaction!

Wow... So many things going on but it's really good. I liked the little thought Ed had on the Colonel all of a sudden. It was nice to read at least a little bit of Ed crushing on Roy. Now I can't wait to see what you have in store so I'm off to read the next chapter. Sorry it took me so long to read it. And now I'm off!!

What in the world was that?!? My mouth was hanging open and everything! That was totally unexpected. I totally thought he was THE Flame Alchemist of Ed's world. It was unexpected but appreciated. Also Lady Rose was very annoying. Too bad Al has taken a liking to her. I really hope you update soon! Poor Ed though, always getting his ass beaten... Please tell me when you update. I apologize for not reading the story sooner but I just love it!! Please tell me when you update! Otherwise I'll not know when to check in! I don't want to miss anything from here on out. I want to see how Ed reacts when he sees this Roy clearly. See ya!

*grins* I was so happy to see that you decided to put this back up on this site. ^__^ Of course you know I think your story rocks, but I just couldn't pass up the opportunity to leave you a review. I hope to see another chapter from you soon. Keep up your great work, you're doing an awesome job!!

- Z

..."Normal"...? What exactly is meant by that? Or is it what I already think it is? So, anyways this chapter all full of action, it was great. Although, I can't wait to see what you have stored for them. What is Ed and Al doing... I wonder. Please update soon! See ya.

Hm, interesting chapter. I like your action sequences; very powerful. The one bit of concrit that I'll give you is that it would be nice to have a little clearer description of the guys Roy is working with - so is "Tiny" alter!Armstrong? I really like the nickname, if so :) Is Cain alter!Fuery? Or are they all just OCs...

Are you going to write more of this anytime soon?

Woah! Very unexpected but very much appreciated. That was a wicked twist. I hope everyone else comes to play soon and I wonder what they have in store for Ed. I'm very curious and cannot wait until you update again! See ya.