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*_* I adore you. In particular: I adore the little details about Ed being high, very consistent; I LOVE LOVE LOVE the fact that you acknowledge LANGUAGE BARRIERS. Excellent.

Can't wait to see where it goes next!

Very cool story so far. I like the historical element of it and you can tell you did your research. Anxiously awaiting the next update!

Haha. I just realised I reviewed your story twice! Just goes to show how much I like it!

I really like this story. I especially enjoy the historical significance you added into it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Okay, there are a few things I'd liked to be cleared up. If that was Roy, then, how did he get there? Also, I was a bit confused at the beginning. There really wasn't a need to re-tell the whole thing was it? Don't get me wrong, I love this story, and I adore the style you wrote it in. It would be great if you re-told it in someone else's p.o.v. Like telling the events that led up to Roy (if it is him) recieving the information. That would be very interesting. Sorry, if it offends you but this is constructive critisicm right? Well, please continue this lovely story of yours. I'll be looking forward to the updates. See ya.

Oooooh plot plot plot and Ed abuse *_* Very nice. And Roy appears, huzzah! I must say I am looking forward to seeing more; plotfic for this fandom is hard to find *_*

Hey, me again. Great chapter, thanks for telling me about the update. I really appreciate it. This story is just too good to ignore. Now I wonder who the General is... I wonder what they have in store for Ed, and is Al going with him? Love your style of writing. I hope you update soon, bye!

YAY! I'm so excited to see you posting this story on this site as well. I am in love with it. It's got a great plot & characterization, not to mention all of my fav characters, and the best pairing in the fandom - Roy/Ed. You've done a great job with this story so far & I can't wait to read more! *hint hint nudge nudge* ^__^ *glomps* You're awesome!!

It's always thrilling to find a good story w/my 2 favorite men in it... with an actual plot to it. *gasp* Shocking, isn't it? ^__^ Amazingly enough, you managed to succeed. I love this story to pieces. *huggles each and every chapter* XD

WOW, PLOT *_*_*_*

Do you have an LJ or something? I am very very interested in how this turns out, and I don't want to miss any of it XD