rate_review Reviews

Ok this is me encouraging you to write more because I have DEARLY missed this story!

*Dumps buckets of encouragment on your head*

I love this fic so much! Roy losing control and being all surrounded by sparks and fire was a dream come true!

AND YOU FINALLY TOASTED THE SENIORE! WOHO!

That made me so happy! I wanted Roy to burn him so bad! and when he did it was so good...

BUT HOW COULD YOU KILL MUSTANG LIKE THAT? HIT BY A CAR!? WTF?!? Seriously, that crushed me, that whole dream/death sequence was gut wrenching! Poor General, and poor Ed, I would think it would hurt him to see the General like that!

As allways, this was worth the wait.

This story still continues to captivate me and it flows very fluently. It has orginality and a very strong plot line. I love it!

I absolutely love this change in Al in this story, I always felt that he really was a lot more like Ed than other's realized. But when Ed was around him he was able to be the level headed, cool, and peaceful one because Ed acted on impulse for him. Chapter 14 review, I loved how Al hugged him at the end, it was so Al. Thanks for such a wonderful story.

Okay, a review for the last chapter posted, please let Ed get out of the situation. And have someone castrate, burn, and torture the seniore, please. I really ditest that guys beyond words. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

This story is very orginal and flows very nicely. Isabella is so adorable and I am glad Al kicked Macy's ass, he deserved it damn pedophile messing with a five year old little girl. This story is very good and it has a lot or realistic aspects to it. Thanks for submitting it.

NOOOOOOOOOOO! You....you are a horrible person! *POUT* Why must you leave me dangling like a helpless fishy. A sad helplless fishy. Why can't you just let Roy and Ed be happy lovvies. Oh well... Please hurry and update.

Noooo!!!! Ed!! Get up, get up, get up, get up!

OK, seriously. I love your story. I have never been an EdxRoy fan, always a hardcore EdxWin fan, but honey you've made a believer out of me! :D Your writing style is excellent. Its simple but not lacking. Although I did notice a few things along the way, its great to see your going back and rewriting/editing.

Please keep writing!!! I must now what happens!! I love the mini AlxNoa subplot you have going. Skweee!! And personally I don't think you could have made a better bad guy. He's soo creepy, and sick, and perverse, but at the same time believable. In my mind he’s a slimy, incapable, snivelling little worm, but I can’t help but be worried every time he’s in the same room as Ed. I LOVE to HATE him!!! *evil grin* Everytime he gets hit in the face(or anywhere else) I give a little WOOT WOOT!!

I also love your version of Roy. He is just like Roy Mustang in a lot of ways, but different in so many others. I think that is what makes me like this pairing so much. And I love his background, excellent job on that one… Him and Ed, they are just so sweet *bounces in chair* … ok, now I am rambling. If I don’t shut up now I never will. Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, Please write!! *bribes you with cookies and pocky*

LadyCera
P.S.
I have added a link to this story to one of my you tube videos (http://youtube.com/watch?v=y6OtfnLXEfA) hopefully it will help this story get the attention it deserves

why? why must you hurt my soul?! roy gets chloroformed??!! why cant the two of them have a chill moment together? there's always something happening getting in the way of their relationship progressing aahhh!! frustrating. buuuuttt i assume thats what ur going for, so good job :) And at least we got that kiss. yay.

It's so hard watching Ed fight when he can't use his alchemy. I get frustrated on his behalf. And what a cliffhanger! I can only hope that Roy's bonds are loosened enough to use his fire powers. The kiss was very romantic, even in the middle of all the tension. Good chapter! I'm always excited to read another one, but they just leave me wanting more, like potato chips.