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NOOOO! You can't leave me hanging here like this!! GAH! I hate cliffhangers!! :) When I got to the end of the chapter, I was like, "NO! There has to be more!" :) The fight scene was so intense! I was scared to death there for a minute that Ed would martyr himself for everybody else - AGAIN! Whew! Are you trying to give me a heart attack or something! :D Man, I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I'm so excited!! :D Roy and Ed are so in love and that kiss was HOT! Somebody, some way, somehow has to save the day and rescue Ed - assuming he doesn't save himself! :) Ed! Use the blood from the wound the scalpel made on your thigh and alchemically fry this sucka!! w00t!! :D A love like Roy's and Ed's can't end like this! GAH! Need more story and soon! XD
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

*there is a lot of detail in this review. if a random person is reading this and isn't caught up, then stop or be spoiled.*

this is not happening. he is not dead. he's not. DON'T! EFFING!! DO IT!!! *ahem* anyway, i'm sure you won't. well...not sure, but almost sure? oh, you can't, because then the whole point of the story is lost! it's about them hooking up!! well, sort of. that's the eventual point. which is destroyed if you kill him now! *chanting* kill the seniore, kill the seniore, kill the seniore! COME ON ROY!! just fucking DO IT! ...wait, he's still tied up. DAMN IT!!!! *sigh* anyway, please update soon, because i HAVE to know what's going to happen!!~

Oh no! Roy save him!!!!! SAVE HIM NOW!

WAAAAAAAAAA! That bastard! I HATE THE SENIOR! Why do you draw out my torment? (Don't answer that I know, he's a perfect villian.)

Another fantastic chapter! This is one of my all time favorate FMA fics! And Taylor IS my favorate alter Roy!

Your fight sceens are allways awsome and the one in the mourge is another good one! Ed is so resourcesful!

Oh and I SQUEED! big time when Ed told Roy he loved him! and then they kissed! weeeeeeee!

Okay I'm going to stop this review here it's getting incoherent.

Ugh. This major general what's-his-face is a real piece of work! arrogant ass. Ed seems to have worked out a pretty good deal with him tho. I hope so at least. I hope he didn't sell his secrets too cheaply. There had better not be any hidden addendums in that agreement! grr! After all this, Ed and Al have more than earned a break! :)

WHEW! I'm so glad Al is OK! :) His first words to Ed, "Don't be thick", had me grinning like a fool! Not only was he awake but he was OK with Ed's confession - not that I doubted for a minute that he would be! sqwee! Ed confessed he loves Roy!! happy happy! Now to get them together and get the hell out of this godforsaken country! :D "It was time for Captain Taylor to learn just why Edward would be a very special person in his life." Why indeed! :) Aside from the fact that they obviously love each other, what could it be?

WHAT?!?!? The twins have found Ed already?!? dammit! I swear, trouble follows Ed like a lost puppy! Oh where is Roy when you need him? He can use his fire alchemy(?) to incinerate these goons once and for all! I know Ed doesn't want to use blood to use alchemy but it doesn't take much to do it really. In the movie (I can not remember how much canon is in this story) all it took for Ed to activate the circle that opened the gateway was the small bit smeared on his glove from the scratch on his cheek. If Ed remembers this (assuming it's part of the storyline), he could use alchemy to save himself and Al from any more harm from the twin goons! It's so doable!! Ed's got that scalpel! One quick nick and let the blue lightning sparks of alchemy fly! Oh how ecstatic I would be if Ed used alchemy to finally rid the world of the Seniore!! :D

Here's all the cookies I got - chocolate chip, sugar, candy cane, and some double stuffed chocolate Oreos. They're yours. Will they get me an update any sooner? :D Hope so!!
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

yay!! here's some cookies! i was so excited, i was actually squealling and stuff in happiness when i saw the update. i can't wait to see the end!! i love this story, and look forward to reading more. hope to see you back soon, so please keep writing!! i can't believe the frickin' seniore is BACK! i hate him so much... it's time for ed to kick some ass, and somebody *coughroycough* had better show up sometime soon to HELP him. not that roy would be a great help, being injured and whatnot, but STILL!! please hurry, but don't rush!~

WAAAA! The twins! No, NO, NO! There you go, cliffhangering us again!

Yet another amazing chapter! Please, oh please, let the Seniores' death be horrible. Maybe Roy could fry the sucker? That would be a nice touch.

You had me going for a moment with the dream in the begining. I though you had skipped ahead and it was over! I wanted to wail!

I just love your Noa. No other author has made me like her so much. And her standing up for her self and giving it to those gaurds was all kinds of awsome!

How about a chocolate raspberry cake with creame cheeese frosting? *smile* i'd ship you one if i could Rysh and I make the best baked goods when we get writers block. We love the story and hope to see another update as soon as you can write it. It does our hearts good to read such great YAOI and it inspires us to do our best and write well too. (as soon as we have a working system that is)

Affie and Rysh
rabid fans

Great Chapter, keep it up. Please update soon, this story is so captive.

*Presents with platter of sugar, ginger, chocolatechip, oatmeal, banana, shortbread and every other type of cookie this reviewer can think of*
“Don't care, either. Now get me a drink,” - That was perfect. perfect prose, perfect Al, just perfect.
But those twins! They make you want to sqeal in delight and strangle them at the same time- what is it about pawns that just drive a pity stake through your heart?
Oh well. Ed confessed. that makes up for everything.
*Hands over twenty more bags of cookies*