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Another awesome chapter! What's going to happen next? How much longer are they going to have to suffer? Please continue soon! I look forward to the next chapter!

I'm glad you posted chapter 18. I was going to write a complaint about you focusing on this story until you get them out of the structure, but you posted so I'll just plead for you to focus on this story please.

Noooooo! A cliff hanger!

I'm totally crazy about this story. \(ºvº)/ yay!

Hi!! I left my review for this chapter over at ff.net about a month ago (whoa. Didn't know it'd been that long ago until I looked up my review just now. wow.) and pretty much said my piece there. I just wanted to give both you and ZaKai HUUUGE major props for posting the great chapters you have while still being bogged down with so much other stuff! YAY!! :) I am reading or have read just about everything the two of you have posted so any chapter from either of you makes me happy! I haven't started on that one of yours that's based on Sabrina, "You Belong to Me", however. I never saw the movie so I'm at a bit of a loss for that one. sorry. Anyhoo, keep up the good work and post more as soon as you can!! :D
Koneko =^.^=

Oooooo! I hate that Italian bastard! When will he well and truly get his? Sure Ed and all ahve wacked him good a couple of times but it's not enough, he needs the ever-loving snot beaten out of him! This story is so good! I was so happy to see an update I actually squeed out loud. The way you discibe the action is amazing! You can really picture it it flows well. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! oh and Thanks Zaikai, your awsome.

I disappear for so long and look what happens! I missed five updates – FIVE! On the bright side, I got to read five wonderfully written and suspenseful chapters all in a row! Whoot! Gotta say, I love how you’re weaving this- my favorite was when you had Roy Taylor manipulate the spark, I loved how you carried over the flame-alchemists powers into this story! I also enjoyed when Noa stole Ed’s personality, which was a little piece of ingenuity that was just entertaining- and Ed and Al sparing, love that.

Your writing is engaging, and the story is still strong- I kept yelling at my computer for either Ed or Al [or even Roy] to kill the Senior, but, ah well, I shall be patient- he does get his in the end, right? *Crosses fingers*

I impatiently await the next chapter!

You have got to stop relying on autocorrection in spell check, it changes the meaning of most words in you story. I love the story but please just let it identify the words and not change them.

Yay! A new chapter, and a really good one, with all the action you packed into it. I'm waiting to see how they all make it out of this, but most of all, I'm curious to see if Roy will figure out what the Signiore did to Ed, or if Ed will be able to tell him.

I forgot to say that I was really intrigued by the way you brought Roy's abilities with fire in. It was a very cool part of the chapter.

This was awesome. I was so surprised to see that you brought in Roy's alchemic power in a unique way. I would like to know more about it. The whole mood switch you did with Noa and Ed was really clever too. I hope to see an update soon! Great job so far!!