rate_review Reviews

Keep up the good work. This story is well written and going at just the right pace. I simply love it.

SO GOOD! More, more, MORE! PLEASE?

This story is amazing! I'm on the edge of my seat after every chapter! I think you did and excelent job making it historically revelent. Yeah, you made a lot of thibgs up, but what good author doesn't? The point is that you are believable. Sorry I waited so long to review I just couldn't stop reading!

You've written the characters so well, the Senior really repulses me! Ed's very in character and I just love your Alphonse. Your Noa too!

I can't wait for more!

YAY! You updated! I'm thrilled about this...!

You really had me going in this chapter, although, it seemed a bit shorter than most of the others and the detail was a lot less. I really enjoyed all of the detail in this story so far, even when you explained the brain thing-- it gave us a sense of what it was really like for Al and Ed when you did this. It gave you a distinguishing characteristic--so please continue in your own style... maybe you were just in a bit of a rush?

Anyways, I loved the RoyEd interaction! It was very sweet and I enjoyed imagining the looks you described throughout the whole chapter. I feel bad for poor Ed-- he's been through a load of SHIT throughtout this whole ordeal.

I don't know what to think about Mr. Maxton finding Shreck... will he really make sure something gets done about everything? I'm glad that most of their weapons were destroyed, but isn't the Uranium bomb still out there somewhere? I wonder how Roy's unit is doing so far and what they will continue to get done before Mr. Maxton stops everything. I can never tell with this story.

I forgot if I told you or not, but I saw the fanart for the story and I think it's very well done! I only wish I could get fanart for my stories as well! T^T

I used to dislike Noa, but I find myself enjoying her presence so far... She'd be really great with Al, I think. Izzy is such a sweety and it's weird... she acts just like my cousin Isabelle! I kept thinking about your story while I visited her, it's insane! ^^

Al's attitude in this chapter really had me giggling. He was such a cute protective little brother, wasn't he? ^_^ He's been a strong lifeline through the whole story, well, in most parts... but, yes, that's really good for Edward.

Ooh, I think I might start rambling again if I don't stop so I'll leave you with a PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON, I LOVE YOU!!!

lovelovelovelovelove,
stupefiednarutard

e-mail: shitake_shroomz@yahoo.com

Your story's great so far ! I just finished chapter 6 but I wanted you to know that some part of the previous chapters seem to be missing =/

Hope you can correct that ^^'

I can't wait to read Roy and Ed's encounter =)

I just love this story so much!

YESSSSS!!!! Woohoo!!!! Ed got to beat the crap out of the Seniore!!!! YAY!!!! *happy dances* Thank you, thank you, thank you for that!!! XD Brilliant escape Ed!! Cutting the hair was genius!! I think I rather like Ed with the somewhat shorter hair. :) (Oops! I said the dreaded 'short' word! LOL!!) *giggles* Roy and Ed are getting closer and closer to being together! YAY!! :D *happy dances again* They got to cuddle for a bit too. so sweet! *happy sigh* Girl, you scared the bejesus out of me when Roy got shot! Ack! Don't do that to me!! :) I just really really wish that Ed had killed the Seniore when he had the chance. I'm totally serious! If he had done that, he'd never have to worry about that sonofabitch again! Ok, granted it would have weighed heavily on Ed's soul for the rest of his life, but time heals all wounds right? Plus, it would have made me happy! (selfish much? LOL!) Now I'm worried for Al. He better hurry up and get back with the others so they can get the hell out of there!! That bastard Seniore better not have tried anything and hurt Al 'cause if he did, I'll kill him myself!! grr!! Oh, one other little thing. You have no idea how happy it made me when they were discussing what to do with Isabella when they got out of there! whew! There's a chance now that they'll be rid of this annoying troublesome brat! Sorry, but I have never liked this kid from the moment she showed up. I'll be glad when she finds somewhere to be other than with Ed and Al!
Great Chapter!! Get well soon, Roy!! :)
Update soon!!
Koneko =^.^=

This is an awesome story, as far as I've read (I haven't gotten far yet, but I'm working on it); however, was chapter 4 really proofread? I still noticed tonnes of errors...

Oh...my...god. I can't believe how frikkin' good this is. This is like one of those movies or even the show itself. There is so much intrigue--plus, it's a yaoi! A RoyED (mm, favorite!) I started reading this just yesterday and with the likeness of all situations... I could see the whole thing playing out in my mind. Although I feel a bit guilty for it, I like the Roy of this world. He's very emotional-- yet not. He's strong and cocky, but knows when to stop. He's not a womanizer and he doesn't lead people on. He's so awesome. I love analyzing his character. From the beginning with 'Shithead' (which was the funniest thing--I know have another inside joke with my friends cuz I told 'em about it) to the Jimmy scene to right up to now. I can't believe how wonderful and constant he is. He's never really out-of-character from the person you made him to be and i personally love that in a fanfic. I can't believe what a great fic I've been missing this whole time.
I really loved the scenes with Roy because it was so real-like. The whole story is so real-like and I hope you are considering a career as either a novelist, a movie writer or something! You are truly talented.
Edward at the beginning, I was like... ooh, you are being quite harsh aren't you Edward? But I can relate, since I have a brother like that. Blah blah blah... He won't shutup, even when you warn him to. But yes, I got so intrigued when everything just, you know, started going down hill. The likeness of the truck ride with Alphonse, Macy, and Isabella was so correct that I got all excited and started jumping around like an idiot. The dying and the abuse and neglect of all passengers... you must really know your stuff! And the conflicts that arose for poor Edward thickened the plot and is still doing so at the moment. I don't know how you do it!
Anyways, back to the story. Isabella got on my nerves a few times, but altogether, I truly adore her character... and Eber-whatshisface. He's nice. Like the giant in the 'Goonies' or something. Ya know?
I like that Noa is there for complication, but at the same time, support. She gets dragged into the mess and could easily be killed or hurt, but she also provides something for Alphonse and Izzy to rely on. I'm glad Izzy is there too, more plot complication!! ^__^
Oh and I do adore the angst.
Omg, I almost forgot about Gino and... that girl (i forgot her name ^^;), the one that kissed Ed and was a nurse. Yes, those scenes were funny and I also loved Giuseppe (sp?). He was so sweet and genuine... although at some times I couldn't trust him at all. There were a lot of people I couldn't trust in this fic and was right in doing so. They were bastards. I STILL don't like Cain. It's ironic that you would choose that name for Roy's "rival", because Cain Fuery was the one who worshipped Roy in the other world.
I actually find myself laughing at parts that might not seem funny to others. The cute, quirky moments that are severe are so funny at times.
I like the Senoire, XD. He's so funny that i can't help but be attracted to his character (NOT IN THAT WAY!!! BLECH!) I mean... as in, I like scenes where he is in it. His personality makes for a good laugh or a really angsty part that makes me squeal because i am an angst vampire and I suck it all in.
Poor Schreck, he doesn't know what he's doing half of the time. Lady Rose can kiss my ass. I hate her.
I loved the transitions and injuries and I JUST LOVE THIS!
Last night, I had just begun to read this, I had to stop at chap. 9 for dinner and I was devastated. We went out to eat and didn't get back until late... so I sat there ALL night and thought about it. Shows that I have no life whatsoever. And I was supposed to be studying for an Exam today. Oh, well, I suck at life! GO ME!!
PLEAAAAAAASE update as soon as you possibly can, but no pressure, huh? I really, really adore this fic! If I had a scanner, I would've made fanart by now. XD

lovelovelovelovelove,
stupefiedNarutard

OMG!!!!!!!! ed and al love!!! and poor ed mistaking roy for the other one. i'm just so glad that al knows exactly what his brother is doing and has done for him. at least he's appreciated. i really hope you get the next chapter out soon because i might just die of excitement. XD