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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah i liked this. The input about the sayian races ways with the stronger and all was interesting. I liked that "goku" was just a mask on the real powerful sayian. ^^ More come? :P
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved the whole thing- Bulma's reaction, the kids' reactions, and then that smexy pole dance! And the passion was beautiful - this story is drool worthy!
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must say that you have a great talent and this is very well written, but frankly, the way you have portrayed Vegeta is unbelievable, he's completely OOC, the way he humiliated himself so willingly is preposterous.
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...definitely interesting.
I love the BDSM theme, and I always love a submissive, willing Vegeta.
I sure do hope you continue- and you have great taste in fics; Spiral was awesome.
I love the BDSM theme, and I always love a submissive, willing Vegeta.
I sure do hope you continue- and you have great taste in fics; Spiral was awesome.
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...I like it. :) Quite good and amazing and yes...very nice.
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh hells! This story was so freaking amazing! You're right: There's not enough BDSM content with the boys, and you wrote it wonderfully! Lets see some more! *whipcracks* ;) Mirai's reaction killed me, and if you ever need ideas for a side-story, I think you should look there and then write your little heart out because I'd be delighted to see a glimpse into the 'house of kakarot'. *grins* Thank you for being such a fabulous author and gifting us with this gem of a fic!
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Quite different then what I'm used to reading. Seeing Vegeta so willing to give himself to Goku, it's rare, but great. ^^
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, this was crazy...this is the first time i've ever read this, i loved it.
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG...First chapter, and I am already in love. *happy sigh*
hehehehe, I liked the warning about too much thinking during sex, wondering exactly what you meant, and now that I have read the first chapter, I see what you mean. However...there was a lot of relevant explination going on, so it was not a henderance to the chapter. :)
Your style is exceptional!!!! I don't know how long it took you to write this, but the flow is amazing. * * * * *
Now on to read chapter 2!
hehehehe, I liked the warning about too much thinking during sex, wondering exactly what you meant, and now that I have read the first chapter, I see what you mean. However...there was a lot of relevant explination going on, so it was not a henderance to the chapter. :)
Your style is exceptional!!!! I don't know how long it took you to write this, but the flow is amazing. * * * * *
Now on to read chapter 2!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROFL...Bulma...*shakes head*
Ah, the second chapter did NOT disappoint. :) Why the heck have you been hiding this talent?!
Points I liked: Kakarott Trusts me. Kakarott wants me. *claps* Excellent!!!!
Ah, the second chapter did NOT disappoint. :) Why the heck have you been hiding this talent?!
Points I liked: Kakarott Trusts me. Kakarott wants me. *claps* Excellent!!!!