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for Experiment in Sensitivity

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person ibshafer
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I reviewed on lj, but yer a good girl, so you get *two* reviews...

I love how you've taken a sweet innocent habit of Ed's - that he tends to fall asleep with his belly exposed - and shown how Roy (who is our stand-in, afterall) responds to that. Watching that scene in "House of the Waiting Family" I kept wishing someone, anyone, would lean down and give that belly a kiss. (OK, maybe not Pinako...)

Great job, girlie! Still love the idea of Roy discovering all Ed's new places....
person milky
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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I love you and tsu so much XDDD Foreplay is very sexy, especially sucking on fingers...very hot.
person Ri
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Two words: UBER HOT! Great job!! My gosh loved it!!!

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