rate_review Reviews

Beautiful, but sad! It really pulled me in. I could relate to Roy having lost a good friend earlier this year. You really put your heart in:) Good job!

Wow. That was just beautiful, Koi. You have such a wonderful way of just tying up your reaer and making them join you along for the emotional rollar coaster. The spacing was perfect. I loved it.

Also, I think that your lack of description in the story really alluded to Mustang's mind set when all of this went down.

Gorgeous writing. Bravo!