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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was sort of anticlimatic, but I didn't think the old king was going to be much of a challenge for the new one anyway.
I don't think either of them care if it's a step up or down. They are happy.
I don't think either of them care if it's a step up or down. They are happy.
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done!!! Glad to hear you may continue this story line with one-shots.
Thanks for the treat!
Thanks for the treat!
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gaah! That last chapter was so hot! I just love how your Vegeta gets hard just from Kakarott watching and dominating him. The Saiyan twist was fun too ^^, and of course Kakarott should be king! A little bit sad that it's over though, you write so well. Liked your version of King Vegeta and your Mirai is simply the best XD
“Hey, gramps,” Mirai chimes in, “nice cape.”
Please do more (you *could* do a kinda fanfic of your fanfic, if you catch my dirft, wanna see more with this Vegeta and Kakrott ^^ *wink, wink*)
“Hey, gramps,” Mirai chimes in, “nice cape.”
Please do more (you *could* do a kinda fanfic of your fanfic, if you catch my dirft, wanna see more with this Vegeta and Kakrott ^^ *wink, wink*)
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must admit to being curious about the spaceships. The Z gang are all acting as though they are unfriendly, but that might not be the case. Best to be prepared than not, huh?
:) You are right, Vegeta doesn't care about most other people's oppinions, but his thoughts of 'Kakarott wants me' and 'Kakarott trusts me' do show that he has thoughts about Kakarott's oppinions of him now.
On to the next chappie!
:) You are right, Vegeta doesn't care about most other people's oppinions, but his thoughts of 'Kakarott wants me' and 'Kakarott trusts me' do show that he has thoughts about Kakarott's oppinions of him now.
On to the next chappie!
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear kami...now there is a sexual subject that doesn't get broached often, at least, not in this fandom. :)
The lemon was yummy if a bit shocking! Nice job.
The lemon was yummy if a bit shocking! Nice job.
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all: "...and Vegeta was all like, I’m a Super Saiyan too." Bwahaha!
Second: "a certain someone is not as dead as we though." Pure evil cliffhanger ^^
Third: I really *do* like this one and you're doing about everything right with it.
Love!
Second: "a certain someone is not as dead as we though." Pure evil cliffhanger ^^
Third: I really *do* like this one and you're doing about everything right with it.
Love!
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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I love this~!!! 'Pure Evil' indeed! Evil to stop there!! *shakes fist* I can't wait for more! Though I guess I'll have to...
Awesome fic...
I love this~!!! 'Pure Evil' indeed! Evil to stop there!! *shakes fist* I can't wait for more! Though I guess I'll have to...
Awesome fic...
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Gohan, but another smexy chapter from you, and the whole 'yes kakarott how may I serve you' thing was fab!!
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, a shower scene, yes indeed this is smut at its best! *flicks ChiChi away with one finger* Who would be scared of that woman anyway? Ok, so I'm also a GokuxChiChi at heart but when it comes to this pair she can crow all she likes. Shoo woman, shoo. Great chapter, it was really fab!
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaah! This is SO good! I've never been a fan of an actually submissive Vegeta but your story makes it all right. Please post more soon!