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( I *am* going to tell Mirai and Jennifer, though, and see if they can come visit tomorrow and we can all have a big sibling and sibling-in-law discussion about this.)

who the hell does he think he is telling them who he is going to tell about them....it's not gohan's choice/decision to discuss this with anyone but trunks and goten---and why would the boys agree to it_____why do they need a big sibling discussion about it if gohan is ok with it__what's to discuss/??/ don't like it

why do you always have to have the boys do the exact same thing??/ trunks eats out gotens ass-catches his cum-puts it in his ass- eats it out of his ass__then goten does the exact same thing---you repeat this over and over---this chap it was trunks asking goten to marry him and then goten doing the exact same thing

"Let me guess. You're not interested just in guys, so you decided that playing around with a woman together and having some fun would be a perfect bachelor party?
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in what universe would that be a good idea- and then you just went and made it mega worse by having trunx give her enough money to retire on___you write this chap like you're gonna make it a 3 way for life---and we read this for trunx and goten-0- not some big titted girl_ coulda warned about the het in the summary_ just like guy on guy grosses out het men_ guy on girl grosses out some non-het men. a warning woulda given me the option to not read this chap

A very cute ending. I love their free spirited-ness, even on their own wedding.

They're so cute being with someone else for the first time. I think it captures the "cheerfully naive saiyan" aspect of their personalities well for an adult fanfic.

chapter was the funniest one out of all of these.

I think I reviewed this a while ago and wanted to say that I am still reading it >w< Glad that you are still updating!

<3

ending was dum dum dum like and I really enjoyed the movie scene a lot >w<

awesome battle but the ending was laugh out loud funny like 'WTF!!!!!!' for the audience X3

this isn't the end is it? I hope not! X)

I hope to see more soon of this good fic!

Hey, I really like some of the insightful moments in this chapter. Like the way Vegeta decides he will have to rethink what "low class" means and Chichi realizes she'll have to rethink "delinquent." It's very cool how you use Goten and Trunks as foils to each other...to bring out each of their unique characteristics. I totally agree with the idea that Goten would have been made less naive by Trunks and Trunks less arrogant by Goten. They sure do compliment each other well and you have shown that quite nicely :) Thanks for updating!