rate_review Reviews

so i was in denial about reading this story since it was with Envy but I think you did a great job in capturing their characteristics. Ed was a little different but I can expect that since he was in the other world and everythin. Amazing story. A little disappointed that Roy was not involve with Ed at all but you have all your other stories to make up for that. But since i've read all of them, I'm hopeing you will write a new one soon. maybe, hopefully. If you do, i'm sure a lot of people will read them. you have talent so keep writting. this is long so bye. take care.

Mmm. It's good. The interaction is a bit sketchy, but I find I like it very much. Perhaps a bit rushed in some points, but good. More than good actually.

Hmmm...so I'll admit, I started reading this for the EnEd and then got completely vectored onto the HeiEd subcontext in it, and wow, Ed and Envy's relationship is so amazing and brutal and...gah ;_; Poor Ed makes a deal with the devil to try and save something precious to him, and then he loses it anyway. Very powerful.

Pretty much the only thing I'll note is that well, I really really think Al would be worried about Ed's relationship with Envy. It's obviously pretty fucked up. And Al hasn't had Ed for two years now, and so it's just hard to imagine he wouldn't be breathing down Envy's neck about treating Ed badly XD

This was an absolutely wonderful story, and I loved how Envy got sweeter toward the end. (My favorite character, the best, go Envy!) I cannot even fathom how much I loved this story. Great work.

Wow, that's a great story. I never thought an Ed/Envy fic could hold my interest for very long but this is an outstanding piece of work. Keep it up.

J_

perfect as every fic I've read of you. thx a lot for sharing your talent!

really really good fic. one of those that i just can't put down till i'm done with it. i liked the gradual change between Ed and Envy, although the Ed-seme fan in me wanted a bit more fighting from him. ah well...Ed-seme is nearly non-existent anyway. ^_~ Rock on!

Love this. LUV it, and luv you. Let's get married, and produce beautiful fic-babies. We can name them Roy/Ed Junior, and Envy/Ed Junior. XD

Beautiful, moving, stunning. *more fancy words that equals the same meaning* I adored it, I simply love how you didn't just throw Ed and Envy together in an act of lust but instead, took the time to slowly develop their odd but realistic relationship. Lovely, just lovely, and if my brain wasn't so fried from work, I'd add in a few more lines of compliments. But as it is, I can barely keep my eyes open any longer, so I shall bid you good night. I hope that more people will review this, heaven knows this deserves more praise.

Much love,
Pastel

Wow, that was great. I really liked this story. I loved they way you developed Envy. (Not my favorite character from FMA). You obviously spent a long time developing this yarn. Thank you for sharing it with me.