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And the plot thickens *DUN DUN DAAAAH*

jesus, the emotional tension skyrocketed in this chapter. not only do i have to wonder exactly how ed will deal with havoc's little bombshell, i have to wonder how havoc himself is going to deal with it. jean is understandably upset about the whole situation, but he seems to be having far too many extra problems with the fact that ed and roy were having a relationship.

really, its getting very exciting.

and yes, i did successfully get added to the update list. thanks so much!

too bad the site was being spaztacular before. my email is shadowshideout@yahoo.com

darling, this story is incredible, but you've left us entirely hanging. this is blatantly unkind. i want to demand another chapter, but i know that doesn't really work. (i am a writer too, you know;-) just know that you have another eager reader waiting in the wings. and i'd love it if you emailed me when you manage to update this.

thanks
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oooooo, you're evil. lol, good chapter! duh! Jean's kinda being a dick huh? lol, keep it up!!!! can't wait for next update!!!

i like this chapter better i can see you going somewhere!

Oh! That was just to short! Another fantastic chapter! I just loved it! Ed ordering Jean around is priceless! I can't wait to find out what he's up too! I hope Riza stays on his side or he's screwed!

Wo make me worry about Al and Winry so much, with creepy Russel/Envy there! I hope all gets a chance to kick ass!

Oh snap, Havoc got TOLD XD
I miss Mustang D:

Damn, that was quick!! Well, right now I am seriously mad at Havoc. I like the idea of him with Riza, but I hate that he's just as immature as Ed. He wants to know things as well and when he's surpassed by a kid (well, younger person...) it's hard for him to keep his pride in check. Overall, I think you did a good job with him. Although he has his moments of maturity, he was definitely more of a "younger" person rather than a stable person to check in with for help. Havoc was a comic relief, sometimes a bit helpful and you've demonstrated that here.

It sucks that Al found out Ed is okay. I wanted him to think Ed wasn't alright, because, for some reason, I dislike Al to a certain extent. I think he's very much spoiled, besides the hard life he's had, he's always been treated good (until that one night) and now he's sitting around getting married. I think I feel like Ed and am jealous. Maybe a secret part of Ed wanted to be like Al, wanted to able to settle in a place and feel comfortable. Anyways, I'm exceptionally tired tonight... I can't think of much to say.

Oh yes, I hope his plan works out as well. He seems to be good at making plans, but who knows what he's thinking? He's distraught with grief and pressured... his better judgement could be out of wack. Anyboat, God I need rest. Thanks for updating so fast! This was a nice chapter in which we learned the feelings of Havoc...

lovelovelovelove,
stupefiedNarutard

man, ed was so fucking cool!! XD i can't wait for the next chapter! ed is - hopefully - going to kick some figurative ass! cha!

and i hope al opens his eyes and learns to be suspicious. i don't want him being hurt because he was too naive to see the truth of things or trust others that do. and fletcher needs to stop being so blind, too. honestly, little brothers... *shakes head*

and where the fuck is my mustang-man? j/k i'm sure you'll get to him when the time is right, but seriously, thinking about roy has me thinking about havoc, and he was being a serious ass. he's so thinking of going for riza and he's condemning ed?! and, was it my imagination, or did havoc seem as if he was in on the "hurt mustang" plan? i mean, he's like, "this wasn't supposed to happen," but it had a tone like it *was* supposed to happen, just not the way it did. i don't know. my mind gets away from me sometimes. but ed needs to hand havoc his ass, because jean's attitude isn't going to fly, i can tell him that. at least, it won't fly with me.

anyway, great chapter, and such a quick update! i'm looking forward to the next one!