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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! Plot twist! I love it I was not expecting that! And Roy thinking Hawkeye is Ed! So sad! I really really cannot wait to see where this fic goes it has so much potential! And making the phone ring once! You are so cruel!
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o.o NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! YOU CAN'T CUT OFF THERE!!!! NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!! *cries and runs around screaming* NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE!!! PLEASE!!!! IT CAN'T CUT OFF THERE!!!!! WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!!!! *sits down and folds arms* I'm NOT moving until I SEE AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! *sits*
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I officially had a heart attack. need i say more
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PS. great update. but if you don't update again soon, i'll probably have another heart attack
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pps. POOR RUSSELL!!! i hope envy left him alive, and i hope that Al pieces it together and gets the hell out of there!?!?!?!
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sorry i haven't reviewed in a long while, major internet issues *fume* i really like where this story is going... although I'm pretty concerned for russell at the moment. I'll be watching for the next update!!! later!
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no one's going to hurt you as long as mustang remains alive *puts butcher knife back in the drawer* oh, that was so moving! i was afraid i was going to cry, and my mom's in the room. and just when ed was trying to get back to him!! no!!! thank you for such a quick update! i was so stoked to see it. can't wait for the next one!
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*stares dumbfoundedly at the screen*
... you made me cry. TWICE.
I swear my computer has never taken such a beating. HOW COULD THIS HAPPEN TO ME!?!?! YOU STOPPED~!!! Just when Ed was coming back! But Ed wasn't there yet, was he? Oh damnable forces that make writers kill you with their awesomely perverted (in all senses of the word) stories!! The first part that made me cry was when Ed said what he did to Izumi. I thought that that was the most beautiful thing ever! And poor Ed, having to think of all of those things... and now... now... MUSTANG WAS HURTEDED AND ED WILL BLAME HIMSELF!!! T^T SO UNFAIR!!
Anyways, yes, the second part that made me cry was knowing Ed wasn't the one he was talking to and he admitted his LOVE! He loves him, he loves him! But, what if saying that made the enemy that was prolly somewhere near hear it and now go after Edward?! I dunno, I guess I'm just being dramatic because... because... oh goodness. *cries in the corner* You evil-!!!
Anyways, I thought it so wonderful Winry is going to use her mother's wedding dress and to think that that clone freak is around them... *shudders* You bastard clone man (his name yet again escapes me, was it Urayami or something close to that?) Goodness and I can't even...TAT
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This was my favorite chapter. THAT's why everything was so quiet before! Something BIG was going to happen and still IS going to happen.
AND DAMN IT!! I need to know wtf Edward did! What did he doooo?!
I believe I haven't been this excited in a while. Thank you, thank you for the wonderfullest FMA fanfics EVER!! I praise ye, oh mighty ALLAH! (I just picked a random religious name... would you rather be Jesus?)
Oh gracious... Some of my steam is off now.
I totally love Edward's characterization... he's so mature now, yet so much like his former self. He knows what he's doing, yet he has no clue. He's like the embodiment of an oxymoron. I love it so!! To think he didn't come to the conclusion that he loved Mustang... I bet he will now-- with Mustang's injuries and stuff. Or maybe I'm wrong, maybe he will rebel and get angry with him for not telling him what was happening. Edward is just going to blame himself I know it! That is just who he is, right? Oh Gawd, don't kill him off, please? IlubvetehROyED!!!!
Mustang is seriously a bit off... talking to a dead man? Of course, didn't he do that in the movie?
I was reading another reply to a review you received and saw that you wanted to make a similarity between Alphonse and Alfons. I guess I could see that when you explained the gravity thing--which was really cool, if I didn't mention that. Alfons Heidrich was much more... settled then Alphonse though, if you look at it movie wise. Alphonse was more energetic and upbeat than Alfons, but, then again, Alphonse wasn't dying of Tuberculosis (that was it, right?). I'm sure Alfons would still be the same, even if he wasn't dying. Alfons was definitely more mature, but Alphonse was also younger. I think the metal Alphonse was a lot like him, instead of the movie one.
Oh, you liked my Dr. Booth? He would've said that? I'm glad... I just can't picture him any other way... What does he look like again?
Things are definitely climaxing at this point-- I hope I'm correct in assuming so-- with everything happening like this. I think there might be more trouble, with the rebellion and all, but this is prolly the first climax, right? Or maybe, the rising action? I dunno.
I'm glad Maes was a positive influence in Mustang's life, though. I think he really is there to guide Mustang along. Just like when he appeared to wave bye to Edward... and of course, Edward blamed himself there too! But, I do think Maes is a big guilt trip, too. Eh... you can never tell in anime... or fanfictions for that matter. ^^;
Anyboat, I am really freaked out about this and please update as soon as you get the time. Thank you for updating so quickly this time too! That was awesome!
I love this and YOU!
lovelovelovelove,
Your fangirl, stupefiedNarutard
... you made me cry. TWICE.
I swear my computer has never taken such a beating. HOW COULD THIS HAPPEN TO ME!?!?! YOU STOPPED~!!! Just when Ed was coming back! But Ed wasn't there yet, was he? Oh damnable forces that make writers kill you with their awesomely perverted (in all senses of the word) stories!! The first part that made me cry was when Ed said what he did to Izumi. I thought that that was the most beautiful thing ever! And poor Ed, having to think of all of those things... and now... now... MUSTANG WAS HURTEDED AND ED WILL BLAME HIMSELF!!! T^T SO UNFAIR!!
Anyways, yes, the second part that made me cry was knowing Ed wasn't the one he was talking to and he admitted his LOVE! He loves him, he loves him! But, what if saying that made the enemy that was prolly somewhere near hear it and now go after Edward?! I dunno, I guess I'm just being dramatic because... because... oh goodness. *cries in the corner* You evil-!!!
Anyways, I thought it so wonderful Winry is going to use her mother's wedding dress and to think that that clone freak is around them... *shudders* You bastard clone man (his name yet again escapes me, was it Urayami or something close to that?) Goodness and I can't even...TAT
:|
This was my favorite chapter. THAT's why everything was so quiet before! Something BIG was going to happen and still IS going to happen.
AND DAMN IT!! I need to know wtf Edward did! What did he doooo?!
I believe I haven't been this excited in a while. Thank you, thank you for the wonderfullest FMA fanfics EVER!! I praise ye, oh mighty ALLAH! (I just picked a random religious name... would you rather be Jesus?)
Oh gracious... Some of my steam is off now.
I totally love Edward's characterization... he's so mature now, yet so much like his former self. He knows what he's doing, yet he has no clue. He's like the embodiment of an oxymoron. I love it so!! To think he didn't come to the conclusion that he loved Mustang... I bet he will now-- with Mustang's injuries and stuff. Or maybe I'm wrong, maybe he will rebel and get angry with him for not telling him what was happening. Edward is just going to blame himself I know it! That is just who he is, right? Oh Gawd, don't kill him off, please? IlubvetehROyED!!!!
Mustang is seriously a bit off... talking to a dead man? Of course, didn't he do that in the movie?
I was reading another reply to a review you received and saw that you wanted to make a similarity between Alphonse and Alfons. I guess I could see that when you explained the gravity thing--which was really cool, if I didn't mention that. Alfons Heidrich was much more... settled then Alphonse though, if you look at it movie wise. Alphonse was more energetic and upbeat than Alfons, but, then again, Alphonse wasn't dying of Tuberculosis (that was it, right?). I'm sure Alfons would still be the same, even if he wasn't dying. Alfons was definitely more mature, but Alphonse was also younger. I think the metal Alphonse was a lot like him, instead of the movie one.
Oh, you liked my Dr. Booth? He would've said that? I'm glad... I just can't picture him any other way... What does he look like again?
Things are definitely climaxing at this point-- I hope I'm correct in assuming so-- with everything happening like this. I think there might be more trouble, with the rebellion and all, but this is prolly the first climax, right? Or maybe, the rising action? I dunno.
I'm glad Maes was a positive influence in Mustang's life, though. I think he really is there to guide Mustang along. Just like when he appeared to wave bye to Edward... and of course, Edward blamed himself there too! But, I do think Maes is a big guilt trip, too. Eh... you can never tell in anime... or fanfictions for that matter. ^^;
Anyboat, I am really freaked out about this and please update as soon as you get the time. Thank you for updating so quickly this time too! That was awesome!
I love this and YOU!
lovelovelovelove,
Your fangirl, stupefiedNarutard
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*GASP!!* ZAKAI!! What are you trying to do?!?! kill me?!?! *clutches chest* Oh, you've broken my little heart! *falls out* Don't die Roy! *sobs* First you soften me up by making me get all weepy over Izumi dying and then you go for the throat and mortally wound Roy?!?! *cries* ZaKai is so mean! Poor Roy is confessing to Ed and he's not even there! That was Ed on the phone wasn't it? That phone call is all in this world that saved Roy from being instantly killed by that sniper's bullet. (I'm totally guessing that it was a sniper here.) ""I love you, Ed..." he whispered, then everything went black." WAAAAAHHHH!! *grabs Roy by the shirt collar and shakes him not caring if it did more harm than good* Don't you dare die on me, Roy! You just realized that you do in fact love Ed and Ed's on his way home to you right now as quick as he can! *becoming frantic* Live dammit! LIVE! *slowly releases Roy's shirt and collapses in sobs* *murmurs softly* Roy, think of all you have to live for. Think of Ed in that beautiful long red coat of his. Don't you wanna see that again? Please Roy, please. Stay with us. *cries*
*wipes away tears* I'm gonna talk about Izumi and Ed now because I can't think about Roy any more right now for fear I'll break down in tears. *sniffle* I'm glad Ed has finally decided to man up and go back to Central (i.e. Roy *wibbles*). It's for the best. Izumi can get as pissed off as she wants to seeing Ed in uniform but, for me, Ed is at his sexiest when he IS in uniform! w00t! I just LOVE seeing him that way! *major drool!* Oh, excuse me. *wipes drool from chin* Anyway, when Ed was leaving (in that uber sexy uniform! rahr! :D) and paused to hug Izumi and tell her "I will never forget you! Thank you for everything!", oh man were you pulling hard on the old heartstrings! And that single tear! OH! He may have only shed one tear but I cried a river! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. I hope Al realizes that "Russell" is bad news and sends him on his way soon. Unfortunately this is Envy we're talking about here and things could get messy. I was so hoping that Al could manage to stay out of all this rebellion mess.
P.P.S. I so did not make the connection between Alphonse and Alfons when you were talking about physics. It is a neat idea. Too bad I didn't catch it. Sorry 'bout that. :)
P.P.P.S. I'm going crazy wanting to know how Ed got Al's body back! GAH! The anticipation is killing me! :)
*wipes away tears* I'm gonna talk about Izumi and Ed now because I can't think about Roy any more right now for fear I'll break down in tears. *sniffle* I'm glad Ed has finally decided to man up and go back to Central (i.e. Roy *wibbles*). It's for the best. Izumi can get as pissed off as she wants to seeing Ed in uniform but, for me, Ed is at his sexiest when he IS in uniform! w00t! I just LOVE seeing him that way! *major drool!* Oh, excuse me. *wipes drool from chin* Anyway, when Ed was leaving (in that uber sexy uniform! rahr! :D) and paused to hug Izumi and tell her "I will never forget you! Thank you for everything!", oh man were you pulling hard on the old heartstrings! And that single tear! OH! He may have only shed one tear but I cried a river! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. I hope Al realizes that "Russell" is bad news and sends him on his way soon. Unfortunately this is Envy we're talking about here and things could get messy. I was so hoping that Al could manage to stay out of all this rebellion mess.
P.P.S. I so did not make the connection between Alphonse and Alfons when you were talking about physics. It is a neat idea. Too bad I didn't catch it. Sorry 'bout that. :)
P.P.P.S. I'm going crazy wanting to know how Ed got Al's body back! GAH! The anticipation is killing me! :)
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!
/me kills Envy before he hurts Fletcher.
Russell I've never liked anyway, but no hurting Fletcher-kun!
But then, in your story, Russell actually acts like he cares about Fletcher, and isn't just stuck with him.
Also, I'd love if you resent that original reply, I couldn't find it anywhere...
If you have MSN Messenger / Windows Live Messenger, add me (diabolical_1@hotmail.com), and when I get that, it'll remind me to check my spam folder just in case (and anything else you send will hit my Inbox =D)
/me kills Envy before he hurts Fletcher.
Russell I've never liked anyway, but no hurting Fletcher-kun!
But then, in your story, Russell actually acts like he cares about Fletcher, and isn't just stuck with him.
Also, I'd love if you resent that original reply, I couldn't find it anywhere...
If you have MSN Messenger / Windows Live Messenger, add me (diabolical_1@hotmail.com), and when I get that, it'll remind me to check my spam folder just in case (and anything else you send will hit my Inbox =D)