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Long time no see Zakai-san! *huggles* Waiii! Another awsome chapter! Love the way you put Al and Winry pairing ^^ Is Ed going to be there at their wedding? I'm sooooooooo curious now! Hope to see the updates soon! ^o^ Ciao!

~Wind

This chapter was so beautiful, you really got the point of them being happy, I have little tears in my eyes. When a writer is talented enough to bring such strong emotions like this to a reader, that means great things are going to happen for you in the future.

ohhhh, i cannot wait until the next chapter. I am rather eager to see what happens. Especially between Ed and Roy.

oh! so sweet! and it's always good to know i was right in my conjectures. ^.~ at least one, anyway, heh heh. while this chapter was uber sweet (and totally squickish with kimblee wanting al *shivers*), i was so set to read more about ed and/or roy. *sigh* i guess i'll just have to wait for the next chapter. i was so toally thinking al would run into russel as well and be kept from returning to winry. haha, guess i'm just so very impatient, ne?

i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update as soon as you possibly can.

I think this might be the first time I've reviewed, but I just wanted to say AWWWWWWW!!!!! I'm not a girly girl but that just made me just squeal, it was so sweet. And so cute. And that poem. I loved it:D

I love this story all together. Though Ed's half of it isn't nearly as sweet I love it too. I can't wait to see where you go with it.

And also I think you mentioned an update alert list, I'd love to be added to it.

*looks around confused* reply? ~I~ got a reply and I ~DIDN'T EVEN SEE IT~?!?!?!

*can't be happy for Al and Winry, too busy trying to find an over-opinionated reply from an excellent author*

*kicks Kimblee square in the ass for bothering Alphonse-kun when he had enough on his mind already*

SQWEEEEE!!!!!!! That note was the sweetest thing ever!!! I just melted! It made me cry it was so beautiful!! :) Using automail bolts to make the ring was just perfect! How romantic!!! :D I think I wanna marry Al now! LOL!! I guess you had to add Kimblee in here to offset the fluff. feh. sorry bastard. grr!! He almost completely ruined the happy moment! jerk. At least it all worked out in the end! :) I wonder how Ed will react to the news of Al's impending nuptials!! OMG!! Al will want him for best man for sure! EEEP!! Ed better find a way to get over the past and make peace with Al before it's too late! oooo! I can't wait to see how this is gonna work itself out!!!
Update soon!!!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. What?!? no Ed? no Roy? *cries* It's a good thing this chapter was one of your best yet otherwise I might not forgive you for no RoyEd this time around! LOL! L8R! :)

AWEE! That was so cute <3
I'm just a little worried now. What'll Al say about Mustang and Ed? U`weee, I can feel the Drama~

That had to be the sweetest thing I've ever seen, besides the Kimblee part. BWAHAHAH, there was a little worry there in my heart for a second. I thought that Alphonse had proposed and then left to find Ed. And then I was like, "Well shit on a stick, he proposed!!" Then I started crying. Literally.

I loved the whole worry on both sides! I was laughing my ass off at the end when I realized what you were doing to them, you sick, SICK author!! (jk) Hehe, I actually quite enjoyed this, but I wonder... When will Ed ever find his happiness? I mean, he got Al back, but Al was in love with Winry and wanted to stay with her so he beat the shit outta Al and left, broken hearted and unloved. Went with Roy, was good for awhile, but guilty. Started smoking cancer sticks, got in a fight with Roy and is now equally guilty because he freakin' loves Roy and wants to protect him but he can't.

I hope something bad happens to Ed! SO THEN MUSTANG WOULD REALIZE HE COULD GET HURT NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS THE IDIOT!! Sorry, the compassion I have for this story is too much.

The whole poem was beautiful...and the idea to use automail bolts b/c that's what Winry loves. I was seriously like, "I wish Alphonse loved meeee!"

Although I was wanting some RoyEd interaction or at least thoughts about each other, I ended up being completely satisfied! I think I must really like AlWin now. thank you!

Please update when you can, you GENIUS!~

lovelovelove,
stupefiedNarutard

*Aka Raditz* Aw a sweet chapter! But please, PLEASE! Don't let Kimblee rape Al! I don't think my eyes could handle reading that! For once I just want Al to really beat the shit out of someone( like say Kimblee and or Archer) in an Ed like rage. He is an Elric after all, that crazy, windmilling, rage has got to be in there some where!