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by ZaKai

schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
they don't fucking trust him?! how the hell...! then again, they know mustang's plan, and i don't so i have nothing to base judgment on, but roy is not a fucking bad guy!

nice job! i love when stories really pull me in like this. i'm getting just as nervous as ed and al, and i even know this story isn't real! kudos, and i look forward to your next chapter.
person Dreamer
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK, your story rocks, please update soon, and if possable, is there a way i can be told when you update? because i would really like to know. it just rocks. (poor guy, i didn't want him to die T___T . but i guess you had your resins for it.)
person kuragari75
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O FUERY!!! NOOOO!!! he doesn't die does he? PLEASE SAY NO!!!! love the chapter btw! BUT DON'T DIE ON ME FUERY!
person raindrop150
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooo! thats just wrong. why would anyone want to kill poor innocent fury!!!?!???? i really really love this storyline, and omg *nosebleeds* at the thought of ed and roy playing superior and subordinate in the bedroo, in unifrom. that was jst freaking awesome. i cant wait for more chapters!
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor fury! T_T
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was so amazingly awesome!! the whole kink between ed and roy, the need for izumi to protect fletcher, and kain!! omg, kain! he's not dead is he? i mean, that's what i'd assume since it would hit home to roy harder if someone on the case wound up dead, but no!! he can't be dead!! but such a great chapter!! i can't wait for the next one!
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, well to start with the part with the uniform in the beginning, damn hot!! with that out of the way, you really seem to have a grasp for characters, Izumi's thoughts about the Tringhams. No Al in this chapter, sad but thats okay. You have to update soon, i wanna know whats gonna happen next poor Fuery :(
person Tsubasa No Koe
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Riiiiight Edo-kun Roy doesn't have any problem with driking.....lolz
person Broken Wings
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heyyyy!!! I reallyreally like this story,so mind e-mailing me when upload? arigatooooou!!!
person Nomme de Plume
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ed's only just now noticing this? this was a great chapter, though i am highly curious what mustang was doing with ed in the library. and i'm dying to know what ed did to get al's body back!! please update soon!!

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