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for Descent

by ZaKai

person Monica
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow ZaKai I absolutely love your story it is getting soo good and your details are amazing it's like watching a movie!! This story is now a favorite of mine... You are a simply brilliant author... Keep up the good work.. From:Your newest fan Monica ^^
person kuragari
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah, I've seen those drinks before. they looked interesting... never tried one though. and until now I didn't know what they were called. awww, that's just like Al... always pickin' up strays. I liked the kiss scene that was cute... and totally Al. ^-^ good job! keep it up!
person ursweetheartles
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well hello the most depressing chapter ever, how are you? that was pretty damn good though, even if it did make my heart hurt a little.
*sends fic love*
person Nakashima Chiaki
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I swear to god i think this is the best fanfic i've ever read. Do you think you might help a struggling author write her first lemon scene?
person stupefiedNarutard
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Edward... Mustang got drunk and was rough with him. Now I know why Riza and Hughes were so worried about his drunk behavior. It made me sad, but I loved it nonetheless. Great job! Don't forget me! shitake_shroomz@yahoo.com
person sam
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was an incredibly powerful scene, really sad though i feel so bad for edward!!! i cant wait to see how he reacts in the next chapter. oh and i was wondering do you know the actual name of that drink?
person raindrop150
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yey! a new chapter! and i seriously want to smack the hell outta roy right now..
the chapter was great and i cant wait for more! and yey! go al! he finally kissed her! yey!
person Mel
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I absolutely love this story so far! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
person kuragari
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! good chappies! yeah, I think I'd need a drink too. can't wait for next chapter! ;) later!
person sami
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy crap this is fucking amazing story!! i love it, and i dont generally like this pairing, well roy and ed i mean, but you make them so sweet! i cant wait to know what is going to happen next, and as you said aff doesnt have alert system (cause they suck!) so i would love if you could email me about it at sammccourt42@yahoo.com.
keep up the good work, and hopefully up date soon!

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