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My email is LadyMisaga@yahoo.com by the way since it doesn't say when I leave a review. I wanted to let you know that reading all the chapters in two days has been exilerating and then when I come to the end I want to scream, please update soon! As I have mentioned, it takes some getting used to between the Al/Winry scenario but he is so sweet and within this story I truly feel he is so much better for her in a way. The palm tree must die, he gets on my nerves, *stupid, mother fucking, cross dressing, hateful, jealous, murdering palm tree* Sorry just had to rant, I hate that thing and feel no remorse for him *it* despite the fact that he is funny in a sadistic way. Anyway, Thanks a million, once again, for writing such a story, you really have so much talent and I hope you update soon. Sorry for not reviewing more often. But keep in mind to overwork yourself, can't have all the talented writers' killing themselves to keep the fans happy, then where would we turn when we wanted to read a good story.

A thought has come to mind . . . I have this feeling that when Mustang is found all hell will break loose. Not only that, but Ed's maturity will definitely come in handy and may expand over time. But if and when Ed and Al meet up I hope the change in him doesn't spark any problems concerning Winry, not that it would get her anywhere considering how completley obvious it is that he loves Roy-just that it is a nagging thing for Al and I don't want to see him have him heart broken like that. Just a thought or concern. Kind of makes me even more anxious to see the two unite and how *interesting* it will be considering how much closer Ed has gotten to the subbordinates that work for Mustang. Only way to know is to wait for the next chapter. Man this review is much longer than the other ones, hope you don't mind . . . Well yeah my head is spinning so looking forward to the next chapter and this fan fic is beyond complicated and so well written.

Gomensai, it's taken me so long to review to this story. I am truly addicted to it, it flows well and there are so many emotions that go through me when reading it. Mustang is an idiot really, sometimes more than not so is Ed. Al is so sweet, you can tell he loves her so much and in this story the pairing doesn't bother me at all. That was just so romantic and thoughtful, Al is so adorable. Anyway I wanted to tell you how much I love this story and apologize again for reviewing so late, I was so caught up in it. It's wonderful and you are a genius to be able to write this so well and stay very well in character with everyone.

Well written and Ed is really in for it with Izumi, but maybe she will be able to get him thinking straight. He's nearly eighteen, and he should beat the shit out of Roy Mustang regardless of the fact he is trying to protect Ed because he is being an ass and Does have a 'drinking' problem. I love Izumi, it really sucks that she died and I hated how it was never that big of a deal in the movie, she was my one of my favorite chracters. Anyway, I am really enjoying this story and thank you so much for your devotion and submitting such a wonderful story.

You did great in portraying Breda, it truly is believable and expected for him to act as you wrote him to act. As always everyone is very much in character. Brilliant chapter, it defintely tuggs at the heart strings, which just means you are doing a wonderful job.

Well, I hope Ed will take what Kain said to heart, chess really does represent so much about life and I persponally love the game (currently tried to explain it to my step-cousin, but I can't explain it very well concerning life and how the game relates to life) I loved how you had Kain explain it like Roy would. This chapter was done very well and on to next one . . . thank you so much for the story and the explanations at the end, sometimes they help out a lot.

Havoc and Ed are so much alike it's scary at times, though neither will admit it and Havoc is more mature at times. I absolutely love Izmui, *"Sit! Eat!"* and just like that everyone obeys her, but I have such respect for her, and Hues was always "nice and insane" a Ed put it. Dwelling on the past when you should focusing on moving forward . . . Next chapter, can't wait to see how Ed handles this 'authority' and 'taking charge' situation. I am sure Mustang's subordinates will help, especially Riza considering how she is, she's strong and she will do as much as she can after all.

Thanks for another wonderful read!

arrrg. *smashes head on desk* this is so angsty!! i hate envy/russel. ...i fell so far behind in my reading. this chapter has been sitting in my inbox for a long time. *sigh* i hope things get better soon!~

Poor Winry...I want to cry for her. The wedding was beautiful by the way. Albeit very sad... THanks for updating!

i hate russel.


well, i hate envy as russel. damn hermaphrodite. oops, sorry, humunculus, or however you spell it. *hmph* and this entire chapter i kept thinking about ed and roy getting married, haha. i am a pervert, ne?

oh, dearie, you're building up to something fierce here, and it's so got me on the edge of my seat waiting for reunions and action. action of any kind, at that. you know, the fighting kind or the loving kind. XD keep up the great work, and i eagerly await the next chapter!!

Oh, I feel so horrible for not reviewing in so long. I just don't have the time anymore. Everything is so crazy with school and trying to find a job... urgh... But, at least there was a beautiful, if not painfully sad, wedding to read! I hate that I haven't seen Ed in forever, but I know that this is just as important. (I'm a little biased, aren't I? Rooting for Ed the whole time...) I can't believe Alphonse is STILL so freakin' dimwitted... even after all the people that has betrayed him and Ed over the years. Surely he would know deceit by now? And the way "Russell" is acting... I just don't understand his logic at all. Of course, Al was always generous and forgiving to a fault. I feel bad that Winry didn't have a proper wedding, but at least Al was romantic enough to say some damned good things. So much has happened in the past chapters... jeez. You're trying to kill me!!! *A*

Oh well... I can't wait for the next chapter either. With Al traveling now too, who knows what's in store. And good Jesus I still want to know exactly what Ed did!!!! (no, i haven't forgotten about that...grrah.)

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