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for Descent

by ZaKai

person Nomme de Plume
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, what does ed want roy to do? and when will ed reveal what he did? vicki's not going to try and warn mustang or someone close to him? though that might be a stupid question cause she might not even know who the flame alchemist is, so forget i typed that. but this was another good chapter, and i can't wait for the rest! update soon!
person Tsubasa no Koe
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gyahhh they're after Roy! XD
person Tsubasa No Koe
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhh lol lust is gonna have some visters lolz
person Nomme de Plume
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just knew it was envy! but they can't seriously think izumi would do such a thing?! oh well, great chapter, though i had hoped for a little more roy and ed interaction. they should really get their feelings straightened out. keep up the good work!
person kuragari75
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooo, the plot thickens! interesting! I can't wait to see what happens! later!
person Le Caitlin-Lyn
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waaah~ This story is so angsty-love! I love it so much, especially the Roy/Ed
I'm not to fond of Winry anymore, though. And I have no clue why. It's like she's stole Al, but she really hasn't.
*Hearts story* Love, and then some more love.
person Nomme de Plume
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*deep voice* another stunning chapter, worthy of even those written by authors of the armstrong family, whose technigues and styles have been handed down through the generations, from word phrasing to handwriting!

little too much, huh? but i had fun hearing the voice in my head. this really was a good chapter, i was so wondering when ed would break down and tell him. i can't wait for the next one! update soon!
person Tsubasa no Koe
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...this is the first FMA fanfiction i've read and i love it so much! can you please add me to the updates list? ^_^ love ur story!!!
person WalkingAway
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WE HEARD THE CONVERSATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*glomps author*

i'm happy now :D
person Ruka
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG these were such beautiful chapters!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next update!

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