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WOOT! GOOD CHAPPIE'S !!! it's coming along great ^-^! keep it up! later.

Wow, nice fic so far. I must say, I tend to steer clear of the angst, but for your story I'll make an exception. It's a good plot and it's got me interested, and I'd like to see how it turns out. I like the fact that all your characters have flaws in them, especially Roy. He always comes off as being too perfect in my opinion, so it's nice to see him as a raging alcoholic for once (I mean, sure there are alot of "Roy's a perverted bastard" fics, but I don't think that counts as a real flaw). Anyway, looking forward to the next update, and could you add my address "blue_cat_sky@yahoo.co.uk" to the mailing list please? I don't normally check out the anime section, so I might miss it updating. Thanks and compliments again. Tab

well bugger. it's a cliffy. i SO wanted to c the conversation between mustang and ed. it might sounds weird, but i love to read the play between characters when a conversation like whats coming up, comes up. the truths and lies mentioned (these show a lot about multiple layers of the characters themselves, and if done right is supurb), the unmentioned subtexts, the anger, hurt, and other emotions influencing the lines of argument and conversation so more details are weedled out of the characters, the whole shabang basically. and to have to wait even more will kill me.... darn my patience for leaving me!!!!

lol 9/10 (not 9.5 because it was a cliffy and my lack of patience is clouding my judgment)

Yay, you updated! But, oh, how I rue the cliffhanger... Anyway, yay!

sure! I'd love an e-mail if you could. It's Leobdollin75@yahoo.com. It's coming along great by the way! figures Al would know when Roy was lying... he always seems to notice those things ^-^! Good job and keep it up!

i'm loving this story so far!!
i've been readin fanfiction for years now, and it's absolutely refreshing to find one written with this much quality in description, character emotion, setting, etc. which also doesn't go over the top with description.
it did have one quite exceptional quality tho. when i read it, i was draw in and didn't even noticing the time going by.
i hope to be able to read more to this story soon.

so far 9/10 (i never give a fanfiction 10/10, but the reason it's not 9.2/10 is because i'm frustrated. i have to wait for the next part for mustang to widdle information out of ed, and with good fanfiction my patience doesn't seem to be with me :D)

i like it so far, i wanna read more please! send me updates!

OMG this is getting so exciting! Now Ed will HAVe to talk!

I absolutely love your story and can't wait until you update it. You must do so soon, I command it! *waves magicky stick* Ha ha! Anyway, wonderful story, full of detail and so not OC. . . well, maybe just a tad. Please continue!

another great chapter! i was hoping ed would wake in roy's arms and we'd get his thoughts on it, but i'm confident it will happen in the next chapter, or something similar to it, ne? such a great story! keep it up!