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for Descent

by ZaKai

person Ruka
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay another update! I thought it was so sweet how Al and Winry embraced eachother!
Please update soon! I can barely wait!
person Ruka
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this really is oneof the best FMA fanfics I've read! Please update again soon!
person Nomme de Plume
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i certainly like the path this story is going. we're obviously heading for mass hysteria and chaos *pumps fist in air* i'm so curious to know what ed did to get al's body back, though i have my hunches... and roy's drinking problem is certainly an aspect i don't see very often. i hope you continue this soon, it's amazingly good! ^____^
person Cassandra
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's me agayne. . .haha. Started reading this story now =) I lyke it. This chapter was rather hot . . . can't wayte for the next one. I'm really fucking tyred though, and I can't think of anything else to say! But I figured I should at least review!!!
person TrulyWished
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such a neat story, I'm really enjoying it.
person pj
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter ^^
person pj
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man.......I love this! it's great. You're truly a very good writer.. please continue!
person cm34
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that very last paragraph made the rest of the story even better
person KKate
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Mustang surely works fast! I mean, sharing the bed is one thing, jump Ed is another! Not that I´m complaining of course, I was just surprised is all. I came back from a very tiring and stressing day at work to find this steamy sex scene, wow it was really good, thanks. Now I just wanna see how you´re going to work on the rest of the unresolved issues, the angst and all.
By the way, I LOVE Al and Winry and you´re doing great with them.
I´m sure this is getting old, but I also have to say that this is the best fma story I read on this site.

Please continue and thank you for writing.
Hugs,
Kk
person ursweetheartles
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, i really am hooked now, i got home from class all wet and tired and this pretty much fixed my night! them boys is takeing their own sweet time getting together, so in charecter... :p

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