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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay updates! gosh, that was pretty angsty... poor Al, sulking at home, at least Ed gets some Mustang, even if he isn't enjoying it at the moment...
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter just made me want to read more and more! You HAVE *if possible of course* XD to write more! You´re a very talented author, your text is well structured and richly descriptive, the emotions are raw and can really touch us.
Please keep going, because as it was mentioned before, mature and GOOD fics such as yours, are really rare treasures to find.
Please keep going, because as it was mentioned before, mature and GOOD fics such as yours, are really rare treasures to find.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good story, depressing and angsty, but in a good way. and good call on the random japanese words thing, thats kinda annoying. i hope you keep writing because now im all hooked... <3
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just to say that this is a wonderful story and you write beautifully, your characterization is exceptional, I can actually see them acting like this. Your words transmit a lot of emotion and true feelings.
It´s the best Fma fic I´ve read in a looong time. Thank you for sharing it with us. And I am extremely anxious to read more.
It´s the best Fma fic I´ve read in a looong time. Thank you for sharing it with us. And I am extremely anxious to read more.
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another amazing chapter. I love the dream sequence. Once again, I can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good story! can't wait to see what happens!! X_X i wanna see! please!
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story! You are a very talented and descriptive writer. I don't believe I've ever read a FMA fic quite like this one. I can't wait for the next chapter! *many many kudos for the amazing story*