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It was good, just as I expected, but I almost cried when I got to the end their was no Eddy! I love little Edward way too much for my own good. I gotta know what's happening to him. Please, do try to update soon!

the wedding was short, sweet and to the point, rather like my own. i knew it was coming that way, and yet it was still refreshing to see that in writing. so many people would have tried to drag it all out anyway. you did a lovely job with it.

*sobs* I don't know why but I always cry at weddings. I sniffled thru the whole ceremony here and when Winry collapsed at the end, that's when it really hit me. I really felt her pain. T_T I just hope Al manages to stay out of as much trouble as possible. But, he is an Elric and trouble always seems to find them wherever they go. GAH! I'm gonna start crying again at this rate! ;_; The only thing that kept me from breaking down completely was Russell/Envy being a jackass. RRGH! I can't wait for that bastard to get what's coming to him!!
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

ugh! The ANGST! It's like a hard slap right between the eyes!

So good!

I would love for you to continue your story. It's very plot based, but the pairings are perfect. I sorta wanted to skip parts, and I did, but I couldn't after a certain point, it just got that good. Please, update as soon as you can. Please e-mail me updates at sasuxnarufan@gmail.com Thanks again

I didn't find this story until friday and have only just finished reading all 43 chapters. I love it, I bow to your obvious talent, I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm dying to know what's happened to Roy, about what chapter should we expect him back?? I feel so sorry for Fuery, being taken advantage of like that. Keep it coming please, I look forward to the next update.
Please can you let me know when you update, my email is sars1@myself.com

great chapter! al... *sigh* oh, al. it's okay... you're just beginners. hope to see more soon! this is an awesome story, though i want envy to DROP. DEAD.~

chapter 43:

great chapter! al... *sigh* oh, al. it's okay... you're just beginners. hope to see more soon! this is an awesome story, though i want envy to DROP. DEAD.~

i stumbled upon your update this morning, and had i had more coffee in my system, i might have squealed in joy. that being said, i didn't read it right away, because angst is so not what i need first thing in the morning. now, while the chapter itself wasn't that angsty, the potential for angst is so great, that even after such a comical event as their first time, my heart is still crying! i mean, what will happen to al when he gets to the people's army? will envy and lust expose themselves and blackmail al into helping them? will al be brainwashed into fighting against the military? if either of those, what will happen when he runs into ed, who's still in the military and is now lt. colonel, in charge of mustang's troops? and where the hell is roy???!!

and you know how my imagination can run away with me! i don't care how long the story is, but i need answers!! DX though, i'll wait patiently like any good fangirl, because this story ROCKS THAT HARD.

(btw, i was having an FMA conversation the other day, about fanfics, and i totally said yours is the best damn story there ever was. no lie. just thought you should know how awesome an author you are! ^^)

"Did he just get between her legs and do it like the farm animals did?" -Bwahahahhaa! Ed and Al really are hicks aren't they? Well atleast Al is. Poor Winry.