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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated. ^^
I'm in this for the long haul; I love long fics with heavy amounts of plot. xD PWPs are great and all, but plot is good for the soul. xD
Update as soon as you can since I'm dying to see what happened to Roy. ^^
I'm in this for the long haul; I love long fics with heavy amounts of plot. xD PWPs are great and all, but plot is good for the soul. xD
Update as soon as you can since I'm dying to see what happened to Roy. ^^
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe people have asked you if you know where you're going with this! I mean, come on! You don't get 43 chapters into a story that is this involved without having some idea of what you're doing! Are they crazy? sheesh. idjits.
I kinda almost wish that Al had let Winry go with him. There's no guarantee that Archer still won't try and use Winry to force Al to come back. Archer could still threaten or arrest Winry in an attempt to make Al surrender and/or join with him. Al's going straight from the frying pan right into the fire leaving with Russell aka Envy! We still don't know what happened with the real Russell and Al is likely to suffer the same fate! Al will be off all by himself headed God knows where to do Heaven knows what! GAH! Damn Envy straight to the hell that spawned him for instigating this mess! grr! At least Al got to spend one night of almost wedded bliss with his soon to be wife. :) Sure it was a bit of a disaster, as the first time often is, but now he definitely has a reason and a place to come home to. There's a tiny part of me that wonders if Winry will end up pregnant from this awkward fumbling in the dark. Wouldn't that be a kick in the pants for Al to come home and find Winry with baby Elric! *laughs at self* Just ignore me. I'm being crazy again! :) Seriously tho, if Ed could just get some good news where Roy is concerned, all will the right with the world! ^_^ Roy's been gone so long. *sniff* Come back soon Roy! Your #1 fangirl misses you!! I'm glad Ed got to enjoy himself on his birthday. It was a short reprieve but at least it helped to lessen the pain of his loss just a tiny bit.
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
I kinda almost wish that Al had let Winry go with him. There's no guarantee that Archer still won't try and use Winry to force Al to come back. Archer could still threaten or arrest Winry in an attempt to make Al surrender and/or join with him. Al's going straight from the frying pan right into the fire leaving with Russell aka Envy! We still don't know what happened with the real Russell and Al is likely to suffer the same fate! Al will be off all by himself headed God knows where to do Heaven knows what! GAH! Damn Envy straight to the hell that spawned him for instigating this mess! grr! At least Al got to spend one night of almost wedded bliss with his soon to be wife. :) Sure it was a bit of a disaster, as the first time often is, but now he definitely has a reason and a place to come home to. There's a tiny part of me that wonders if Winry will end up pregnant from this awkward fumbling in the dark. Wouldn't that be a kick in the pants for Al to come home and find Winry with baby Elric! *laughs at self* Just ignore me. I'm being crazy again! :) Seriously tho, if Ed could just get some good news where Roy is concerned, all will the right with the world! ^_^ Roy's been gone so long. *sniff* Come back soon Roy! Your #1 fangirl misses you!! I'm glad Ed got to enjoy himself on his birthday. It was a short reprieve but at least it helped to lessen the pain of his loss just a tiny bit.
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
review chp 43
i have but one thing to say this time around: thank you for having a realistic first time experience with the two virgins. too many people make it all wonderful and flowery and perfect and its so not.
i have but one thing to say this time around: thank you for having a realistic first time experience with the two virgins. too many people make it all wonderful and flowery and perfect and its so not.
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If there is anyone in this world that can create suspense then it's you. I NEED to know what's going to happen next or I swear I'll wither away and die. xD
Please add me to your mailing list. My email is Aerithkitana@hotmail.com
And please(x100) update soon. =3
Please add me to your mailing list. My email is Aerithkitana@hotmail.com
And please(x100) update soon. =3
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nya, would you mind putting me on that alert list? My address is thelightsshadow@gmail.com ^^ I can't wait for the next chapter!
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
review chp. 42
oh my. just...oh my. oh, al.
that was intense. and poor al. this is really going to screw him up.
oh my. just...oh my. oh, al.
that was intense. and poor al. this is really going to screw him up.
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stupid Envy, stupid soldiers, stupid...stupidness!! >< Gaa, this review really sucks, but I don't care! Add me to the update list, please, ShamanKing986@yahoo.com Update soon! *huggles Al and Winry*
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter 42:
no! bad!! first of all, the phone tag-thing isn't cool. 'they'll call back if it's important.' BUT THEY DIDN'T!!! ed! it's your turn, if you didn't know! and AL!! i'm apalled. i was pissed at the soldiers for attacking winry, and i was cheering for al to kick some serious ass, but then... he went in, and i was saying, 'al... um, please stop?' i wanted him to kick ass, but not... not THAT much ass. and then he did it, and i was sad because al has completely compromised his character now. he's just...not the same innocent little boy as before. i look forward to more!!~
no! bad!! first of all, the phone tag-thing isn't cool. 'they'll call back if it's important.' BUT THEY DIDN'T!!! ed! it's your turn, if you didn't know! and AL!! i'm apalled. i was pissed at the soldiers for attacking winry, and i was cheering for al to kick some serious ass, but then... he went in, and i was saying, 'al... um, please stop?' i wanted him to kick ass, but not... not THAT much ass. and then he did it, and i was sad because al has completely compromised his character now. he's just...not the same innocent little boy as before. i look forward to more!!~
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O! "Hello thar plot" indeed! OMG! Al killed him! I can't believe it! wow. I'm kinda stunned right now. Sweet little Al is now a murderer. whoa. I guess it was only a matter of time before Envy managed to manipulate Al into doing something this drastic. Now Al will have to leave Risembool a wanted man. I'm scared to even think about what Envy wants to use Al for. :[ I wonder if Al will become so horrified with what he's done that he destroys those gloves.
*chuckles* Ed doing Roy's job and being unbelievably bored with it! Now he knows how Roy's felt for years! :D It was funny when Ed had that piece of paper stuck to his cheek when he let his head rest on the desk! :) I wonder how many times that's happened to Roy! :D It's sweet to see Ed being so grown up and wanting to do Roy's job better than he did it. It's almost like he wants Roy to be impressed with what he can accomplish while Roy's not there. Breda almost made me cry when he said, "We're working on it", when Ed said he wanted Roy back. ;_; What is it with Ed and phones? He has the worst luck in the world with them! :) This makes, what?, at least three times that Ed's run afoul of the phone. I would say that it's like a curse but this is just Ed's usual run of luck. :) Ed can't find the courage to call and Al can't find the words he wants to say. *sigh* When these two finally do see each other again, they're gonna have to talk for a week just to catch up on everything they missed because of missed phone calls! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. Roy? *looks around for him* Roy, where are you? *sniff* still no Roy. *pouts* You do know that the anticipation of Roy's return is killing me don't you? meanie!! :P LOL!
*chuckles* Ed doing Roy's job and being unbelievably bored with it! Now he knows how Roy's felt for years! :D It was funny when Ed had that piece of paper stuck to his cheek when he let his head rest on the desk! :) I wonder how many times that's happened to Roy! :D It's sweet to see Ed being so grown up and wanting to do Roy's job better than he did it. It's almost like he wants Roy to be impressed with what he can accomplish while Roy's not there. Breda almost made me cry when he said, "We're working on it", when Ed said he wanted Roy back. ;_; What is it with Ed and phones? He has the worst luck in the world with them! :) This makes, what?, at least three times that Ed's run afoul of the phone. I would say that it's like a curse but this is just Ed's usual run of luck. :) Ed can't find the courage to call and Al can't find the words he wants to say. *sigh* When these two finally do see each other again, they're gonna have to talk for a week just to catch up on everything they missed because of missed phone calls! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. Roy? *looks around for him* Roy, where are you? *sniff* still no Roy. *pouts* You do know that the anticipation of Roy's return is killing me don't you? meanie!! :P LOL!
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha! i am sorry about the review from last time. i didn't think it would do that to the screen. i took it off for you. so here's chapter 41's review, without the very long no. ^__^
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NO~O!
and just in case that wasn't clear enough - NO! how could they do something like that?! damn humunculi. i hate them all; they should all die a horrible and grisly second death! and i hope kain doesn't believe what pride tells him and looks into everything himself, and comes up with the idea to "pretend" to do what pride and sloth want, but really help roy and the others. and speaking of roy, that bastard better have a good explanation for keeping me waiting for as long as he has. and wtf was with the drawer? was roy there? or was havoc going into his private stuff to find something that has to do with the orders he gave havoc and riza? and i hope those two haven't decided to not go through with is orders, whatever they are, because i would feel as if they'd betrayed roy that way.
gods, this is so angsty!! and another thing... ed would be able to tell something is wrong with russell, right? i mean, envy hates ed so much, he couldn't possibly be able to hide that much animosity, you know?
sorry, i know i just asked you like, 80 questions that you can't answer - because that would spoil the story - but i'm just so damn excited and anxious! anyway, i look forward to the next chapter, if you couldn't already tell. ^__^
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NO~O!
and just in case that wasn't clear enough - NO! how could they do something like that?! damn humunculi. i hate them all; they should all die a horrible and grisly second death! and i hope kain doesn't believe what pride tells him and looks into everything himself, and comes up with the idea to "pretend" to do what pride and sloth want, but really help roy and the others. and speaking of roy, that bastard better have a good explanation for keeping me waiting for as long as he has. and wtf was with the drawer? was roy there? or was havoc going into his private stuff to find something that has to do with the orders he gave havoc and riza? and i hope those two haven't decided to not go through with is orders, whatever they are, because i would feel as if they'd betrayed roy that way.
gods, this is so angsty!! and another thing... ed would be able to tell something is wrong with russell, right? i mean, envy hates ed so much, he couldn't possibly be able to hide that much animosity, you know?
sorry, i know i just asked you like, 80 questions that you can't answer - because that would spoil the story - but i'm just so damn excited and anxious! anyway, i look forward to the next chapter, if you couldn't already tell. ^__^