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i am exhausted and freezing, so this review is going to be short and sweet:

i fucking love it. love the story, love the angst, love the suspense, love you.

this is the best story ever! XD as always, i look forward to the next chapter. *kisses*

*is mind-fucked*

Al? Kill some one? Out of cold-blooded rage?

So did NOT see that comming!

What is Ed going to do when his brother winds up in military prison for killing a soilder?

This just gets better every chapter and I can't wait till thing really pick up and the action gets going becasue I just know it's going to be awsome.

Gah! I hate Envy. But he wouldn't be a truly good villian if we didn't loathe him, would he?

Now...THAT was a plot twist....Feury about to be tricked into being a spy for the bad guys....can definitely say that I did not see that one coming...that was a good surprise. Understand about time. You write good stories and we your adoring public will wait. Merry Christmas.cat

though i really have missed getting more frequent updates on this story, I do understand completely your position. This story is very well written and I am anxious to see where it leads. I will do my best to be patient. Good luck in your studies.

review chp 41

nope, haven't had a chance to try the drink yet. between moving stress and work stress i actually forgot all about it.

this chapter had a lovely bittersweet tone to it. i really enjoyed it. but...poor kain. poor, poor kain.

They are so bad, screwing with an amnesiac's head. I think we all know he wasn't a spy. Bad bad bad

And I'm glad Ed feels better and that Al's coming. It feels a bit like things are really going to get started after this point, like we're heading for a climax. And I can't wait. Wooo

NO! Not sweet, little Kain?! Those evil bastards! I hope he comes to his senses! And wasn't a very compramising photo of Ed in the drawer in Roy's bedroom? Man, when you do plot, you do plot! There is so much going on int this story its incredible!

Another absolutly fantastic chapter!

-Jes

chapter 41:

...AAAARRGG!!! *hyperventilating* i can't believe this. i CANNOT believe this!! okay, it's time to kick some humunculus ASS!! i couldn't pick between pride/sloth and envy, but i think i choose sloth, then pride, then envy, with lust after that.
kain can't... kain won't... damnitall!!! this isn't faaaaaiiir!! they're gunna feed him LIES to make him be bad! I WON'T ALLOW IT!! i challenge the humunculi to a fight to the death! and then i'll kill dante too, just for good measure! wait... i can't even remember the back story to this. dante's the one in charge here, right? *is feeling retarded* it's been too long since i've read this. BUT ANYWHO!!
yay! roy might not be dead (which i totally knew but had no proof). who the hell shot him, anyway? and who got into his desk drawer? i know ed didn't do it, so who did? and envy! al needs to get rid of him NOW!! i'm on winry's side on this: shove him in a ditch, bury him with concrete, and leave him for dead!
well... i think i ran out of things to rant about, so i'll try to stop. just, please! keep writing! i need to know what happens next!!~

I knew you were teasing me with the Roy coming back comment. :) I just hope you got everything I wrote since it's not all there in the review. I wrote more than just that one line. I was quite the drama queen with my pouting if I remember correcty. :) I wonder why it didn't post? weird. I get so hopeful with every new chapter that Roy will reappear but, so far, nothing. :( At least there is the hope that Roy is still alive somewhere thanks to Dr Knox! Good ol' Dr Knox! Where would we be without him! :) "Odd tastes" huh. Uh, yeah, I think he's on to ya, Ed! ;) I can not wait for Roy to finally come home!!! The waiting is killing me! :D

hmm. Now why was Jean just loitering around Ed's neighborhood like that? Kinda suspicious if you ask me. He calls to make sure Ed is going to be out of the house to visit Kain, he's supposedly "heading toward a friend’s place", and Ed finds a desk drawer that he knows he didn't mess with slightly open. hmm. Me thinks maybe Jean is up to something. Snooping? Spying? Or, better yet, maybe he really IS heading toward a friend's place, Roy's new hiding place! :) OOH! Has Roy finally healed and escaped his captivity? Did Roy send Jean to his house to get something for him? Has Roy been playing possum all this time to throw off his other enemies? I wonder who else knows and is helping him work in secret like this. Hawkeye probably if no one else. She would never leave Roy's side at a time like this. Meaning Ed is on the outside again 'cause Roy is trying to "protect" him again. *sigh* You see what giving me a smidgen of hope does? My imagination runs amok with fanciful conspiracy theories and dreams of Roy's triumphant return! :D
me: Come home soon Roy! Both Ed and I miss you terribly!
Ed: I don't miss him!
me: Then why were you crying?
Ed: I wasn't crying! The aftershave irritated my eyes s'all.
me: hmm. If you say so.
Ed: *glares*
me: *grins*

*cries* Poor Kain!! He can't defend himself against these evil bastards!! ;_; Hey wait. She wants him to continue to spy on Ed AND Roy? hmm. Did she just drop a hint that Roy is alive? Maybe I'm just reading too much into her words. The bitch is already lying so who knows if anything else she says is the truth. :( "Atrocities committed by the colonel"?!?! WHAT!!! Oh it's on now biatch!

Not much going on with Al and Winry this time. They made up, made plans for the wedding, and Al FINALLY decided to go find Ed. I wonder what Al will think of Ed when he finds him. Ed now smokes, drinks, and has taken over Roy's position. Al may not even recognize Ed when he sees him in uniform (which Ed looks un-by God-believably gorgeous in!! w00t! *drool* Sweet Jesus hallelujah I love me some Ed in uniform!! :D). It's funny that Al is worried that Winry will hook up with Ed! We know that's not even remotely possible but he doesn't! I wonder if Al will freak out or be relieved (or both) when he finds out that Ed is with Roy. I'm still mad at Al for not kicking Russell/Envy out of the house before now. Any man who allows someone to annoy his lady the way Russell/Envy has isn't much of a man if you ask me. The sooner Russell/Envy is gone the better!
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

Why the hell are the reviews all stretched out across the page?? First aff chops off part of my last review and now they screw up the look of this one! WTH?!? I hate it when it does this. :(
Koneko =^.^=