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chapter 36:

okay, i am like *twitch*. i might not stop again until i finish. this is so good! i really want envy to get caught, and i don't want anything to happen to al or winry. and havoc needs to not be an a-hole. because i don't like side of him. i like his new crush on riza, though. never really thought about it. anyway!! i hope whatever ed has planned works out!!~

chapter 40:

arrrg!! i can't believe this! when i started reading, i was really hoping it was completely done, but of course it's not. i mean, it's only forty chapters... i really love this story, and i SO knew it was ed calling! ed should not be drinking so much, but it's okay. i don't think he'll do it too much. i hope. damnit. AL!! YOU SHOULDA ANSWERED THE FUCKING PHONE!! that would have gotten her back in the house. and seriously- what the fuck is up with envy? he's pissing me off. please please please please please update as soon as you can!! i'm looking forward to more, and i really wanna know what's going on!!!!! i would like to be notified when you post, pretty please? authress16@yahoo.com THANK YOU!!! this is one of the best fics i've read, and i want to see it to the end!!~

chapter 33:

*random squealing noises of irritation* noooo!! as much as i'm mad at mustang, he can't DIE!!! that wasn't in the aggree meant! he deals or ed leaves! there was no option of DYING!! damnitall! this isn't fair! he won't die, right? he just finally admitted his feelings. to hawkeye, no less, but he thought it was ed, and that's what counts!! and envy! he needs to get the fuck away from al and away from rizembool. in fact, i hope archer and them catch and hang him! that would be the best thing ever. grr... so many things to make me upset!!! poor izumi. i hate that she's dying. and i wanna know what ed did to get al's body back!! AUGH!! i love this story sooooooo much! i wish i could just keep reading, but tommorow is a voting day. voting! i get to vote for the first time tommorow, so i need to go to sleep! damn. good night, and i shall return as soon as i can!~

chapter 30:

almost forgot to review. i wanted to keep reading! the poem was cute. i knew it was for winry almost since the first mention, and i guessed poem when he was complaining to himself about mediocrity. and sig found ed!! i hope al and them get a phone call. and what the hell is envy doing? i hate him. i hope russel gets away. i'm afraid envy's going to use this info to do something baaaaaaaad. damnit. and roy!! you fucking asshole! you did to rape his mouth! and you have a problem! ADMIT IT, YOU DICK!!! *deep breaths after ranting* i hate him... i really love this. your style is great, and the character development is excellent. i look forward to more, and i would like to be on the alert-list if this isn't finished yet. ooh. and i only have 10 chapters to catch up! my email is authress16@yahoo.com
keep up the great work! i am worried about ed staying with roy, but he seems to really care about him. grrr... either roy has to take care of his problems, or ed needs to get someone knew.~

chapter 24:

oh! i totally called russxfletch way back when russel left and they snuggled up in his sleeping bag. and OHMYGOD!!! no! russels is NOT gonna get shot when he gets to rizembool, is he? i will be SO pissed. and roy is still an ass. and poor fuery! damnit!! he's gotta be okay. *wants to shake something, mustang being the first item to come to mind* why?? i'm so confused, and i've been chewing on my fingers for the last four or five chapters now!! AAAARRRGG!~

chapter 27:

...i'm so confused. to be honest, i don't know what i've read. archer is an ass, and ed needs to call home. envy... envy is weird. russel is in trouble, and i'm irritated that izumi is so anti-yaoi-cest. anyway, i wonder what al was writing... and roy is a fucktard. i don't care that he thinks he's doing this for ed's benefit; he's hurting him, damnit! and i hate seeing ed get hurt! i want to know what everybody but ed knows, i want to know what ed did to get al's body back, and i agree with hawkeye. ed needs a new 'roommate'. to be honest, i think havoc would be a cute choice for him. not for this, but in general. anyway, i'm comPLETEly off topic. this is a great fic, and i hope to read more soon!~

chapter 21:

okay. this is getting really heavy. roy is an asshole. plain and simple. he has a problem, and ed needs to leave. damn. and i really like them together too. but damn. i read a review from someone else, which i wish i hadn't because it said a couple things i haven't read yet, but i agree with them now. ed needs to get out and find someone else. and there's probably more of the abuse, both alcohol and physical and probably some mental, to come that i haven't read yet. *blinkblink* i just realized i'm more than halfway through what's written so far! wow. anyway, it's beddy-bye time. -_- i sound like a kindergartner. anyway, until i return, this has been excellent!!~

chapter 12:

anybody notice i'm reviewing every three chapters? just me? okay. anyway! great job. i love the developement of the relationships. *note to mustang: ROY!! you have. a fucking. problem. NOW DEAL WITH IT!!* i thought roy hiding his sexual items was amusing. i look forward to me citrus, and i hope the boys talk to one another eventually!! i'll be back!~

This is not a criticism, it's my personal opinion.

I do not like your Roy/Ed. At all. I like your writing, I like some of your characterizations, I REALLY like your Sound of Silence fic, but overall, I hate your Roy/Ed. It's not romance to me, it's abuse. Through and through. It never seems like a healthy relationship. Roy never seems to respect Ed as a person. I just can't bring myself to like it, no matter how hard I try. Normally I hope Roy and Ed come together in the end, but with this all I can think is, "Ed, listen to Hawkeye and FIND SOMEONE ELSE."

I mean, I think you're talented and all, but I just don't like the way you portray their relationship.

chapter 15:

okay. this is looking good. roy finally got some answers, though he did get them the wrong way. ...i love angst. i think there's something wrong with me sometimes, but other times i think it's because i can relate to it. especially angst when there's no real reason for it. this is looking really good and i can hardly wait to come back!~