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chapter 6:

okay! i really do like this. i was so, i want to say 'happy', but that would make me out to be as big a bastard as mustang, when they finally fought. but it was just a relief. i knew it was coming and the tension was killing me!! also, i have othello too! i liked that game a lot when i was younger. i even knew what it was without the endnote!! *feels special and pats own back* unfortunately, it is time, again, to go to bed. hopefully i will be back tomorrow! anyway, i was afraid ed was going to try to drown himself in the bathtub, partly because that would have been what i would have writeen/done in your/his position. (i do have a slight depression problem) ANYWAY!!! i keep getting off track! great story, i hope roy and ed make some connections, and i hope al and them find out ed's not in a ditch and that ed finds out al isn't dead! looking forward to more!!~

chapter 9:

yay!! i finally reached a lemon! it was great, and i look forward to more, as always. poor ed... he's so depressed. and al's finally letting some of his feelings for winry show! he's so sweet, i love al to pieces. and BAD MUSTANG!!! he's drinking too much. shame shame.~

chapter 3:

okay, i'm intrigued. i hope to be able to return soon, but that may not be the case with a paper to write, another story to read, and halloween shopping to do. when i come back, i'll be sure to drop a review and let you know! also: thank you for pointing out that they aren't japanese. i knew it, i think, but it hadn't really clicked properly in my head. so thanks. i do like how ed and al are just being increasingly pissy, and i look forward to more. but for the time, i am off to bed!~

this is a wonderfully written story and I can't wait for the rest. I especially liked Ed's reaction in the bar as though I'm 21 I'm lucky if i'm not id'd for 15 and it's exactly those sort of thoughts that run through my head. obviously not the military uniform but it really is something you do if you ook underage you try to find an outfit that makes you look at least credible because it's irritating an embarressing to be asked for Id again and again every single time you go to the bar and find that it's a different barman you have to resist the urge to snap 'look I'm not only overage but I'm probably capable of introducing you to this bartop without breaking a sweat and it's not even like i'm asking for more than a coke so don't ask.' I like how Ed's growing and maturing without becoming really un-Ed like. Thanks for the story

Damnit Al! Answer ur phone!

Ed has got some serious bad luck where telephones are concerned! First, Roy is shot and bleeding all over the place (;_;) when he called and now Al's relationship with Winry is going to hell in a handbasket! *sigh* I have an uncle who used to be the world's worst for drunk dialing. *smiles fondly* It was annoying as hell when he'd call at some crazy hour but some of the stuff he would say would be quite entertaining. completely incoherent but funny as hell. You had to be there I guess. Anyway, it breaks my heart to see Ed using Roy's coping mechanism (i.e. drowning his sorrows in alcohol) to get him thru the day. T_T Be strong, Ed! You can't let yourself get all messed up on that stuff! It (the alcohol) only makes a broken heart hurt worse and you need to stay sharp with Hakuro watching you like a hawk! I still wanna throttle that damned Havoc for getting Ed hooked on those godforsaken cigarettes! grr!! In fact, I think I will! *grabs Havoc and proceeds to throttle, kick, mangle, and do otherwise very bad things to him!* AH! *dusts off hands* Much better! *evil grin*

Applejack. Amaretto Sour. Red Death. Fiery Blue Mustang. *smiles and shakes head* Where do they come up with these names? :) Personally, I like Fiery Blue Mustang - the name not the drink! Too strong for me! I have zero tolerance. I'm worse than Ed. :)

I don't know why it was so funny but Ed sitting down to pee cracked me up! It wasn't meant to be funny I know but it hit me just right I guess. Sounds like something a little kid would do. :) *hides* No, Ed, I wasn't calling you little! *runs* :)

"*blinks* oooooh...you want Roy to come back??? <_< Why didn’t you just say so in the first place?" *facefaults* Dammit ZaKai! Stop teasing! The suspense is killing me! *pouts* meanie! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. I wish Ed had worn the uniform to the bar. He is unbelieveably sexy HOT in uniform! w00t! w00t! *drools* :D

this only leaves me wanting more, i hope you know. and i think i want to try that drink now. that is, if the second rate bartenders around here know how to make it, haha.

i'm feeling so sorry for ed. and i'm starting to worry for al and winry and where their relationship is going to end up. man, there is so much angst... i'm in love with so much angst, even when it makes me eat my heart out.

keep up the awesome work!!!

review chapter 40

okay, now that was tragic. (like this entire story hasn't been!) so sad to see all those repeated patterns and continued interpersonal screw-ups. and then finally--finally--ed gets the courage to call his brother and his brother is so messed up that he doesn't answer.

i think you broke my heart a little with this one. of course i can think of an entire fic that you've writtent that did that as well.

honestly, though, its some nice work yet again. and thanks for the mixed drink recepie here; i'll have to try that one at my next bar night.

WOW I'm really impressed. I spent most of the day reading this. I'm so glad to have found something so in depth. I find it hard sometime to keep my interest in something with so many chapters, but you've done it! Of course I'll cry if you actually make Roy dead. I cant wait until Ed an Al make up. Hmmm will you be killing off Russell or will he get saved? Argh! So many questions. I guess I'll have to be patient and wait until next chapter is posted.

I'd love it if you could add me to your "chapter notification" list. I really want to see how this play out.

review chp 39

glad you like the chapter labling idea. i started doing that when i realized that i had no idea what chapter my reviews were coming in on here at aff.net. it makes me feel better, anyway. :)

this was a lovely chapter, darling. you had me crying during the scene with gracia at the cemetary.