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GRRRR!!!! IS HE ALIVE OR NOT!!!!! lol, love the story... but you're really good at frustrating your readers!!!! lol, can't wait for a next chapter!

OMFG, they were talking about mustang!!!!!! those two whispering dudes in the library!! at least... they better have been, because it means he's alive, but their choice in words worried me. they made me feel as if they were brainwashing roy, like roy wouldn't be himself when they finally let him go. but then again, are they going to let him go? they were just saying something about releasing information or something.

and what's this at the end!? havoc and riza and mustang's orders!! what orders!!? weren't those two the chief people who disagreed with roy's plan in the first place? what's going to happen if they change the plan of which no one knows about, aside from you? man, i am so damn excited for the next chapter! hopefully more answers are forthcoming.

and if you haven't heard it in enough chapter reviews already and can't tell by the many exclamation points used in this one, i love this story. <3

I think this is my favorite chapter so far, ^___^
and thank you for updating your fics so fast.

I barely have the brain power to review, but I just want to say you're still doing a hell of a job. I'm so intrigued and I know it will probably be awhile before Roy reappears, but at least you hinted at the possibility he's being hidden. That whole deal with Sheska excited the shit outta me and I totally can't wait to see his triumphant return. I almost thought Hakuro was going to make a move on Ed- hehe. When you said Ed could see his boots, man, talk about invading your personal bubble. I'm glad that each man reconciled their differences and that Ed is starting to improve when given more advice and support. I love the relationship between Jizo? and Breda, that was adorable and I really liked the dialogue between them. Such a cute thing!

I'm really wondering what the dinner will be like? ... I don't even know what to expect... you surprise me a lot.

Could you explain to me a bit what's going on with Kagegkuski (sp?)... I told you I'm brain dead at the moment. School and a play has left me powerless against the forces of understanding politics and all that smoogle. My stupid English teacher makes me think about thing in Sigmund Freud and Carl Jung's perspective. It's interesting, but makes me think entirely too much.

I'm so glad that I have the temporary use of this computer! I LOOOOOOOVE this story will all my heart!!

lovelovelovelove,
stupefied-narutard

Yay! I'm glad Ed was able to fix some stuff. And that whole scene in Gen Haruko's offices was priceless! And you have managed to make the plot even thicker. Damn this just gets better with every chapter! I love how Ed is slowly learning, and how the chess analogies keep playing in the story. If Ed didn't do a little head butting he just wouldn't be Ed!

and now for the rant part of this review: WHAT DID YOU DO WITH OUR ROY!?!?!?!?!!? Give him back!

Ya know, when Roy does come back (*glares at Zakai* He better be coming back soon or I won't forgive you! :D), he's gonna be amazed at how much Ed has changed! He's a lt colonel now, he's learning to control his temper (Ed, my friend, I feel your pain on this one!), he's forming new relationships with Havoc et al, he's learning office politics, and, thanks to Gracia, he's finding out that he and Roy really do have a real relationship! He just might figure out he's in love after all! :) Our little Ed is so grown up now! *dabs tear from eye, realizes she just said 'little', sees Ed glaring, smiles apologetically then runs like hell from the manic mini typhoon! XD*

Who knew one could learn so much from a simple game of chess? ;) All of the lessons Ed's learned so far have come during the play of this game; which means he'll either grow to love the game or hate it. Poor Ed got stomped by Breda! ouch! I bet Breda and Fuery would give each other a run for their money if they played each other! :) Does everybody in Roy's inner circle play chess? Looks like it. Must be a military tactics training thing.

I think my favorite part of this was Ed's confrontation with Hakuro! Ed really was like Roy when he got in a few really good jabs at Hakuro without it being too obvious he was being totally insincere! :D Loved it!! The way he indirectly accused Hakuro of hiding Roy, good one! It really pissed me off when Hakuro said, "You understand me, boy?", after he'd chewed Ed out for not being mature and not respecting the chain of command!! Boy?!? Yeah, that's showing respect for a fellow officer - NOT!! grr!! I'm not surprised Hakuro is involved in Roy's disappearance. He's hated Roy for so long I wouldn't be surprised if Hakuro himself was the one who shot Roy in the first place! "That’s what I like to see, colonel. It’s good to see that you can be trained when a firm hand is applied." *raspberries* Careful General. Even a tame dog will bite if you provoke it enough. ;) I hope Ed finds a way to stick it to Hakuro! Both Hakuro and Douglass are total assholes!

I really really really really really wish Ed would stop smoking. *sigh* Just one more reason why I should beat the hell out of Havoc! grr! I'm curious about what he and Riza are talking about. It's been so long since Roy's plans began that I can't remember what they were. :( Maybe next chapter will help me remember.

It's kinda fallen by the wayside, but are you ever gonna tell how Ed got Al's body back? I'm still curious about that. Speaking of curious, that conversation Sheska overheard was very interesting! I'd be trying to sneak down the aisle to overhear more! bad me! :D Hakuro's henchmen are getting fidgety and talking too much perhaps?
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

Riveting! I love Ed and Kain playing chess together it is so adorable! And I love how it helps Ed figure things out!

And OH MY GOD! Is Jean trying to get his ASS SHOT, by telling Riza to go home? Damn, when did he grow some balls like that? Seeing Riza all emotional must have effected his brain. Yeah, she's a woman but she's still the First lt. He can't go all trying to take care of her now.

and poor Vato, the man got and earful didn't he?

I can't wait to find out what happens next! Ypur plot is so wonderful!

good for you al!!! you keep that resolve! lol, I love it when Hawkeye puts people in their place. love the '"That must have been some door..." line... made me and my roommate laugh! Please update soon! ^^

review chp 38

well, now. that bit in the office just cleared it right up for me. i still think there may be a bit more to jean's tension that what he said, but he also may not realize it. (or he may think that he's okay with ed and roy having a personal relationship, but not really be.) but hey, if you cleared it all up that simply, it wouldn't be any fun. (or add any tension)

something about this chapter seemed less deep than some of the previous ones, but i don't feel slighted by that. you seem to be moving the plot along nicely.

vato is a hero, just because he has an inkling that others are underestimating ed. huzzah. anyway, envy's getting on my nerves. when does he not, really, but still... and poor al, being bandied about between factions, then practically threatened with winry's safety. and w00t to hawkeye for finally confronting havoc, the patronizing little bastard that he's being right now. man, i used to like him, lol. and where is my mustang!?? i hope they aren't like, operating on him somewhere in the bowels of central, turning him into some kind of bionic man. of course, he's probably just being held prisoner. his injury is the perfect cover for the military - those working for the rebellion - to get him out of the picture, because, apparently, he's their biggest obstacle.

anywho, i look forward to the next chapter, as always!