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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...these chapters are very long, so I will review for each, so I don't forget.
I love Gohan and Anthra together. Anathra seems to be happy with Gohan, so what is all of this about have Deleros fire him? I don't get it; unless Anathra is doing it in order to keep Gohan out of danger?
GRRRRRR, why did Wadra have to come and tell that to Gohan? I think Anathra's got a plan, and she may have just well ruined it!
I love Gohan and Anthra together. Anathra seems to be happy with Gohan, so what is all of this about have Deleros fire him? I don't get it; unless Anathra is doing it in order to keep Gohan out of danger?
GRRRRRR, why did Wadra have to come and tell that to Gohan? I think Anathra's got a plan, and she may have just well ruined it!
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! :( I've seen it coming, you've been mentioning it the whole story. Still. :( I didn't want it to end like that!
It might have been better for Gohan if Tarrus had killed him.
On to the last chapter.
It might have been better for Gohan if Tarrus had killed him.
On to the last chapter.
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH! There's the semi happy ending I was hoping for! Eeek! Gohan had to go through the motions HOW many times? To finally get it right? But in the end, it was actually an action on Athara's part that made the pieces fall into place? GAH!
Excellent story Chayron!
Excellent story Chayron!
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome ending! "The truth shall set you free." That statement comes to mind in this chapter.
Athara decided to trust Gohan with his secret and it changed everything. (As well as eliminating Tarrus' apparent enemy, Kaisho.) Great job.
I wonder if you will write a mini-sequel. (Ha, I know how things intended to be mini, grow into monsters. That happened with my first fanfic.) It would be interesting to see where this new turn of events takes them.
Sequel or not, I enjoyed it a lot. :)
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this just got way, WAY more interesting. :) Nice twist!
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I figured Athura was who he turned out to be. Interesting point of view his character has. I look forward to the next chapter.
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Anathra finally let Gohan in. Now I am just concerned if 'they' can survive this together. *sighs*
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May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The strip poker was a lot of fun! I hope the blond (can't spell his name) doesn't go too far and get himself killed.
Is Anthra going to take advantage of the fact Gohan has no clothes now?
Is Anthra going to take advantage of the fact Gohan has no clothes now?
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, I wonder what role this new fellow well portray.
POOR GOHAN at the end of the chapter! AAAAAH!
POOR GOHAN at the end of the chapter! AAAAAH!
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another captivating chapter! The new guy seems to know how to get what he wants, quickly; while Gohan takes his time. :)